Never really posted a poem anywhere before, but I recently got into poetry (or maybe just rhyming). I would love some feedback/*constructive* criticism, and of course thanks to everyone who reads it for taking the time to do so!
My first attempt at rhyme in my poems.
unusual of me, but I was really feeling some rap music today... & felt inspired. so here's the product. not that great but it speaks for me.
4.11.13
Thoughts on paper...purges the toxins. Ahhhh...
This poem was originally written for an assignment but i decided to post it because i liked it.
