weepingwoman, you been sleeping?: weepingwoman, you been sleeping?
up with changes, you must be keeping
you say you're a dot, like to be put to good use
crazy I'm not, unless there's a screw loose
aren't you a part of every website that's existed?
I find it very hard to believe you missed it
gotta run, more time to spend here I don't got
have a nice day, I guess dot's dot
Poetry: One sees in this poem that you really can write beautiful, insightful sensitive poetry. Why wast you time on protest songs when you can write this kind of poetry. Oh well. Just my opinion. However, there is a deep compliment in tha comment.
Only now it’s funny?: Only now it's funny? Then it wasn't funny? I just created it this morning! Wow, life is getting too fast paced for me. Thank you for your kind words.
If I was asked..: If I was asked to compare you
To what you don't got
Wouldn't want to share you
Definitely not
Please pay attention
I need you to listen
Don't you feel blue
She got no pot to piss in
WORKS BOTH WAYS: OFCOURSE I NOTICED IT WORKS BOTH WAYS WHEN I WROTE IT. I RARELY REWRITE MY POEMS. I LIKE TO LEAVE THEM AS THEY COME TO ME. AS YOU SAY IT WORKS BOTH WAYS AND THAT IS THE WAY I CHOSE TO LEAVE IT. THERE ARE A FEW INTERESTING COLLABS I DID WITH A COUPLE OF FRIENDS THAT ARE ABSTRACT POEMS THAT REALLY WORK BOTH WAYS IN AN INTERESTING WAY. YOU CAN READ THEM FROM THE FIRST LINE TO THE LAST OR FROM THE LAST LINE TO THE FIRST AND THEY ALL WORK BOTH WAYS...INTERESTING PHENOMENON. THEY ARE CALLED COSMIC ELECTRIC COLLECTIVE UNCONSCIOUS, STRAIGHT FROM THE HORSES MOUTH AND IF YOU DON'T BELIEVE ME. I BELIEVE THEY ARE ALL ON THE SECOND TO THE LAST PAGE OF MY POEMS...I JUST LOOKED FOR THEM PRETTY RECENTLY TO SHARE AGAIN AND WHEN I DID I PUT THE LINKS FOR THE OTHER TWO POEMS IN THE COMMENTS SO IF YOU FIND ONE YOU WILL HAVE FOUND ALL THREE WITH THE LINKS FOR ALL OF THEM. I AM SHARING THE LINKS FOR ALL THREE IN THE ORDER THEY WERE WRITTEN IN HERE...
I SEARCHED FOR THEM HERE IS THE LINK TO THE FIRST ONE THAT HAS THE LINKS TO THE OTHER TWO ON THE COMMENTS OF IT... COSMIC ELECTRIC COLLECTIVE UNCONSCIOUS THE NEXT IN ORDER IS STRAIGHT FROM THE HORSES MOUTH AND THEN THE LAST OF THE THREE IS AND IF YOU DON'T BELIEVE ME...ENJOY
https://postpoems.org/authors/pamschwetz/poem/690684
https://postpoems.org/authors/pamschwetz/poem/690640
https://postpoems.org/authors/pamschwetz/poem/690654
What a short fun ditty: You may have played around with the postion of Combination and compliation. Would it also sound great
IRISH STEW AND MOUNTAIN DEW
WHAT A COMPLIATION
LIKE THE RHYME BUT NOT INCLINED
TO TASTE THAT COMBINATION.
Thanks for the cheery poem and somehow that kind sounds ok together though a beer would be more in line. Hope you dont mind my fooling with your poem.
Debbie J