*When Love Becomes A Lie*



 Trisha Barrek Hopkins


In the begining was great

But towards a month passing

I started to get a feeling of hate

And wondering if we would be lasting


You tell me you didn't do a thing

My gut tells me a different feeling

To my heart forgiveness I try to bring

But no matter how hard it tries

My heart is having a hard time healing 

At night....Every night it cries

I know of the hints they are revealing

I pray none of them are true lies


I promise you from the start

That I'd stick by you no matter what

But you also promised you wouldn't break my heart

And now it's going back to being half shut

It's beaking apart


I will keep to my promise we won't ever part

I hold on to what you have told me 

But if when our love becomes a lie 

I will have no choice but to set you free

I don't want to really though

Because my heart will then fully die 

And I will be left with pain

With nights of tears to show

And I'll be alone....all alone

I'll be left to cry

My heart then turns to stone 


All because love became a lie 

The promise you made to me 

You never were ever going to keep

The love you said you gave

You promised you would never leave

My heart got broken my chest caved


Your words you lead me to believe

All that came out of your mouth was true

But now my heart bleeds

Of pain and agony

And I'm crying on my knees

How much I'm broken apart

Don't tell me you didn't know

I promised you I wouldn't leave

But your love you no longer show

Maybe it's time you give me back my heart


You said you would stick by my side 

For me you'd always care 

But I see now that was a lie all along

You lead me on and that's not fair

Maybe we don't belong


You told me your love would never end

You said you'd always be faithful

And always your love you'd send

But you no longer call me beautiful

Now we just feel like friends

My love I don't think with you I can share

I believe now you were pretend



*Lonely Crys*

Trish Marie Barrek Hopkins
From creative writing class in high school: "Our Own Voice" 1998
East Stroudsburg High School 
Mrs Heeters Class


Lonely cry's
My heart dies
My life falling apart

Lonely cry's 
Loving you so 
The glitter has left my eyes 
But you really don't know

Lonely cry's 
A lost soul
That cant be found
Saying my good byes 
Not person hearing a bit of a sound
Stopping my tears is my goal

Lonely cry's
Crying my last tear 
Bringing out your lies
Losing control is my biggest fear 
Bringing back self esteem and blue skies

My heart is in pain
Wanting you near
Your love has left a stain
But you cant hear

Lonely cry's
You didn't mean to cause
Our love that together ties 
Our love for now we have to put on pause
We weren't meant to say our good byes
God has a plan

For now all i have are these lonely cry's
Don't know what to do
But god will lead me on the right way
But still my heart dies
I know we will be back in each others life someday


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Enter My Fear

All of the welcoming emotion suddenly dies.
and the darkness shrouds the land in only misery's cries.


Enter grief!
A timeless ocean. 
Trapped of despair, trapped without relief
Enter the moon!
Endless racing of the thoughts.
Including you alone, trapped dead inside an empty room

The dead is holding you stiff once more!
Staring into your eyes, never have you felt so gone before

The time comes again, to pit against all that is you
Will you ever find the part of you that is actually true?

Paint the sky bleak
Consider everything we cannot speak

The one painting with the sun I painted as a child is lost.
Reality has broken the barrier, this is the ultimate cost