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Do you think I covered all the bases without making it something it is not? LOL What is lust to you? That is what matters, if you ask me.

This was my third attempt at a piece for a poetry slam I'm going to try my skills at soon. The first two I liked, this one I was hesitant about. It's one of those ones you have to go back and reread. I feel like the verbal performance wouldn't do it justice.

A saga written as a ode about incidents revolving in mind, involving a few of the girls I met. Their sounds still ring in my head!

Love Sonnet #1001

This is my first post,  I have someone that am in love with and I am trying to forget, I am married and so is she.  To limit my pain, I try not to contact her, but today I had to contact her via IM for a work question that I needed the information.  The poem describes how I feel,  writing kind of helps my brain move on to what I need to do.  Any comments that you care to make are appreciated.  -Runningman66

I would really like feedback on this piece in particular because it is currently my favorite one I've written so far.