Inspired by Emily Dickenson's "I felt a Funeral in my Brain"

My first written poem. The title simply signifies the teenage years and I feel as if it really dug deep into my 17 year old head. Please tell me what you thought of it.

A little more tongue and cheeky humor....if you don't get it....too bad, so sad'

balance in relationships. some people don't want to be adored...they just want to share equally.

this is about an experience gifted to me by a doctor whose care i was once under as a child.