shattered

Prose for Poets, a lil tongue and cheeky

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Just a thought!

Wow, I have read some sick, sad, shit on this site.It would seem, half the "Poeteers" are either...

In therapy, been in therapy, or need therapy...Or can't write poetry so they use this as a journal to show

just how non-poetic their life is.. 1."I can't love".. 2."nobody loves me"..or..3."my love left me". I'm quite sure

those were the first three, "Rules of Life", in the "Rules of Life book" when you joined...#4, 5, and 6 were

#4, Have a good cry..#5, Realize you're not the only one with the problem..#6, Don't be a sad sac the

rest of your life...#7. Get over it...#8.Grow a pair and Move on!  #9, Try to write something that doesn't start out with..."Poor poor pitiful me"... "My life's so pathetic"...or... "My life is over because , out of 7 billion people in the world, this was the only person that could complete me"....Last but not least, #10. Try to write something good and..."Have a Nice Day"*:D big grin

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I read so many sad stories pertaining to love, they became repeatitive and started to become humorous, as if they were all from the same cult and consulted on what to write. I knew what the next line was going to be, because it was the same in the last one. Their thoughts began to run together...bla, bla, bla, my life is over, I'll never find love again..."Geeze"..Take a number and draw it from a hat to decide who gets to post it next.  P.S. "Not everyone can post the exact same sad story and change the signature"...Will the real author please stand up!

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Wrong Love

If you don't get it back,

   Nothing will happen;

   Nothing gets solved.

You sent me a hearbreaking love song,

   Had me in tears.

   Had to be strong.

You and I are in the wrong era;

   Never cried like that before.

   I will love you forever. 

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Prism of maimed love

i'll walk alone.. with your precense carved into my heart...

not even stones could break down what i've built up. not any hatred... no fear.

it's going to stay right here..

as long as it remains untouched.. if I can manage to let it be..

then i'll always have you with me.

 

as much as I may look up to the stars & cry..

as much as I ask the sun why...

how often I wish the clouds away.. 

is as much as I feel you every day.. 

 

maybe there is a sharp fence around your heart...

is there cotton in your ears..? is your vision pitch black..?

have you gone blind? is your mind in tact..?

do you think you're just fine..?

 

silly me.. still wondering, though we've left it all behind..

 

all I really want is to die in the grace of someone I love..

gazing into their eyes.. arms held tight..

my spirit could finally take flight. 

 

i'm so fucking sick of this misery..

i'm tired of not having any energy..

i'm done with the pressure on the sides of my head..

i'm finished with the aches in my back.. 

i'll drown out all the nausea..

I will forget about the broken glass..

the shattered past.. 

 

if we didn't know such a thing as sadness existed, would we still feel it..?

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3.10.13

SHATTERED

Hopes

and dreams

once again shattered

Tossed into the ocean

drowning.

ITALIAN

Speranze
e sogno
ancora una volta frantumato
gettato in mare
annegamentoe

GERMAN

hoffnungen
und trauma
erneut zerschlagen
ins meer geuorfern
ertrinken.

SPANISH

Esperanzas
y suerios
una vez mas destrozado
lanzaron al mar
ahogamiento.

(c) copyright heather burns

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Esperanzas

y suerios

una vez mas destrozado

lanzaron al mar

ahogamiento.

ENGLISH

Hopes
and dreams
once again shattered
tossed into the ocean
drowning.

(c) copyright heather burns

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SHATTERED-IN FRANTUMI-ITALIAN-(CINQUAIN)

Speranze

e sogno

ancora una volta frantumato

gettato in mare

annegamento.

ENGLISH

Hopes
and dreams
once again shattered
tossed into the ocean
drowning.

(c) copyright heather burns

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CINQUAIN

Hopes

and dreams

once again shattered

tossed in the ocean

drowning.

(c) copyright heather burns

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hopes

und traume

emeut erschuttert

warf in den ozean

ertrinken.

(c) copyright heather burns

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