giving up

Only the Strong

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1/19/24. Open to some honest feedback.  Like it, hate it, needs fine tuning? Let me know 

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Dripping in Gold

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Dead Pool

Just a thought!
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"Dead Pool"

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I haven't given up... And I eventually got back up... Still, it's hard to shrug off the pain and the disillusion once you've failed... That's why I write this poem... Not to encourage failure but to understand it, to learn how to see beyond the pain and see what it can teach...

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To Find Myself Without Love

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Giving up what is loved because together there can be no progress, just the same cycle on repeat

Tired by dfx

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Please Don't Go

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The Battle

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Thoughts/Comments appreciated.

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