Life

Let Me Be

Ugonna Wachuku  

 

Let me be gone 

now ... Silence! 

Silence of the 

grave ...

 

Life on this 

enchanting 

earth home! 

 

Humankind with 

heartless homes: 

 

Fading moments of my
awakening...

 

I walk through unknown

pathways and river banks.

 

The mind in me is still;
yet wandering through
uncharted landscapes 
and meadow sea shores.

 

This new day, I stare into
the clouds, hoping, wishing,
wondering if you'll let me be.

 

At night, I watch your stars
and moon; waiting, hoping.

 

Fading moments of my
awakening...

 

My journey has been a long
one. I have waited so long
in the eyes of human
recokoning.

 

I really keep wondering
whether you'll let me be.

 

Fading moments of my
yawning awakening...

 

My soul is heavy ladden.
My spirit reaches out;
searching to find some
meaning to this desolation
on flourishing farmlands
of abundance and beauty.

 

Will you finally let me be
who or what I am meant to be?
Because, now, this day, there
is a joyful pain in my soul.

 

Will I be? Will I be?
Good Lord, I am still
waiting on you; while 

still striving, asking, 

seeking, knocking on

heaven's door of your 

deeply compassionate

heart. I am hopefully 

still waiting: "do not
pass me by!" 

 

Let me not be weary.
Let me soar and mount
on wonderful wings like
your eagle of my essence.
Just let me be who I am 

created to be, abidingly: 
I humbly plead! 

 

Humankind with 

heartless homes: 

 

Fading moments of my
yawning awakening...

 

My soul is heavy ladden.
"Do not pass me by."

Give me your

mustard seed
faith. Let me

not be weary.  

 

Let me go 

home now

into your 

goodness

for there

is

s

i

l

e

n

c

e

!

-  

 

Let Me Be
~ Critiques/Comments ~

Misty Lackey  

countrygal_cc@yahoo.com


This poem has very strong words. Strong and powerful. I am glad to see
you again, reviewing my poetry, loved what you wrote on western
desire.. you are a true peach of a talent yourself. love yea, misty
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Douglas Lazard
dougiebgood@hotmail.com 


These words, as if from a waking dream, call out to the soul as they
call out to God...
Yes this...
that thou hast called me to do and be... Let me be!

Peace my Brother and God's love ~~~ Dougie ~
http://PostPoems.com/members/dougie
2002-08-07 19:16:16


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All of Me

Ugonna Wachuku

 

The sea is so silent
on distant horizons.
Heart-beats tell stories
of love and parting.

 

Like whistling waterfalls,
I follow your path in nature.
I follow the dream of your
disarming beauty.

 

I follow the welcoming
road to your deep inspiration.
And in your emerald eyes, life
is born anew for humanity and
for little me.

 

Now, I am back to the
pathway; back to those
sweet dreams you hold
for me in your soul.

 

So, when I tell you
stories from my caring
soul, do not wait, take
these stories within you
and remember that whatever
you do, I'll always love you.
Remember all of me
even when I am gone
because just one day,
I'll surely go the
way of all mankind.

 

Remember all of me,
if you will, even
when I am gone.
And indeed, in your
enrapturing
emerald
eyes,
life
will
be
born
anew
for
humanity
and
for
l
i
t
t
l
e
me.  

 

 All of Me: 
~ Critiques/Comments ~  



Valerie Jochum
vjochum@hotmail.com
You know, my little bald one, I will always remember you!  ALL, OF
YOU.  What a beautiful poem to read at 5AM!
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Charisma *T.A.* Makatita-P
charisma@freehomepage.com


within ocean's waves we will hear the sounds of yesterday memories
upon streams near tomorrow whispering your name unforgettable reality
Inspired by your words I wrote this little one. we will always have
someone/something to remember.  Charisma
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Teresa Jacobs
truffels-37211@yahoo.com


WoW!!! Truley a beautiful poem. I expect nothing less from your
writings Ugonna. You are such a wonderful person. Your writing tells
me all I need to know of you. You are beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
http://www.postpoems.com/members/charisma



Deborah Russell
sellwein@hotmail.com


All Of Me was also the title of a song my father used to sing, from
the fifties, I think. (Don't take my word for that). But that is why I
clicked on the poem from your index.  I love these two lines:  I
follow your path in nature. I follow the dream of your disarming
beauty.  Very interesting to read and interpret in several ways.
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Myra Lochner
myrataal@mweb.co.za


Dear Ugonna  An evening spent in your poetic presence ...  So many
stories to tell;  so many songs to sing.  Life is forever Arrival and
Depature.  Dreams are universal breathing: the inhalation of
everlasting yearning.  Ah, to follow the Path, reaching at last
distant, evasive horizons!  Myra Sun
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Lorraine Reutter
nittykiddy@aol.com


I just finished "All Of Me" what an inspiring,moving poem, which makes
one realize in this one sentance...(Life is born anew for humanity and
for little me) Just how small we are in God's vast universe! Ugonna
you have wisdom,compassion,education,and a loving humble spirit,
Thankyou so much for sharing this poem, Lorraine
http://www.postpoems.com/members/lorrydell



Karen Ferreira
karfer2000_1999@yahoo.com


What a wonderfull poem. Men, you're great! You know what, you made me
remember the time I was in college(Brazil), I made friends to the
eternity and for a moment I was traveling on the time and felt between
then again. We had a good time together, we enjoyed the nature there,
every single act, every single word. This is a kind of love, when you
find friends and can count on them, you found a treasure. And your
poem made me live my precious moment again. Thank you for be an
inspired poet! Keep going, you're on the right way! See ya!
2002-02-13 21:30:28  

 


Lesa Gay
lesajg@aol.com


Hi Ugonna,  This is wonderful.  I have spent a little time visiting
this evening and I am very impressed at what I see here of you.  Wow
what a bioagraphy and list of acomplishments!  I will be back to read
more of the person that is you.  If you have the time I would love for
you to visit me at my site as well.  I love for people here to sign my
guestbook and take the time to comment, good or bad, on something that
they have taken the time to read.

Thank you for a delightful time this evening visiting your sight.  Lesa
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2002-02-20 21:04:12  

 


Robin Schmidt
kaos444_99@hotmail.com  


Of all the people I have met on post poems I know I will always
remember you, your kind words and everything I have learnt about you.
Thank you for know what to say to make me feel better inside! Peace
and much love. Good luck on your poetry. Luv a Friend
*Starlite Angel* 


~Robin~
http://PostPoems.com/members/starlite_angel
2002-03-03 19:49:45



Jill Calahan
jcal420420@aol.com


Hey, great work! I love your style of writing. Keep it up! ~*~ Jill ~*~
http://PostPoems.com/members/poetry_is_life
2002-04-28 22:29:53 

 

 

Nikola Kitanovic
nikola@nikola-kitanovic.com


Excellent poem! Thats not only "memory" or "memorial" poem. This poema
have universal power. I will be glad to translate this poem into
Serbian language.

Nikola,
poet, novelist and critic writter
http://www.nikola-kitanovic.com
http://PostPoems.com/members/nikola
2002-05-27 19:01:06



Christina Veala
baffc@aol.com


I like the idea of this poem. Like you want to live on in the eyes of
someone else. Very powerful, I enjoyed it quite a bit.

Christina Veala
http://PostPoems.com/members/baffc
2002-06-19 16:45:05



misty lackey
a beautiful poem, well written with a lot of feelings and just plain
beauty from deep inside of you.
http://www.postpoems.com/members/mistylls
2002-09-12 13:26:50



Patricia Jones
patriciajj@hotmail.com


Beautiful, as always. I don't believe I've read anything of yours I
didn't love! Pat
http://PostPoems.com/members/patriciajj
2002-12-01 23:21:36



Judy Costea
snowmansmom@hotmail.com
Ugonna,


What a beautiful poem this is. and truly who could forget someone like
you. You leave a path where ever you go thats easy to follow.
Thanks for putting your poetry on for us all to read.


Judy
http://PostPoems.com/members/snowmansmom
2003-01-24 02:44:11



Tricia Coker
triciacoker@charter.net

So very beautiful and thought provoking!  This is the first one of
your poems I've read, and I must tell you how impressed I am.  Having
read many of the critiques you've left others on their work, I finally
see what you are all about.  A wonderful, beautiful person, and so
very talented!

Kind regards,
Tricia
http://PostPoems.com/members/pkpbc1950
2003-04-27 19:17:47



Jas Scherlag
jashiphop@aol.com


This poem is amazing. The natural feel to the poem gives it a lot of
emotion. It's a strong poem. I like it much. :-)
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2003-06-08 10:50:47



Qiona Redfield
cute_tanny@hotmail.com


gosh!!!! i only have two words for you: trully amazing!!!!!
i love your stuff!!! keep writing please!!!!
http://PostPoems.com/members/qiona
2003-12-15 05:13:29  

 


Ali Saad
himystory2@yahoo.com


I enjoyed this read very much. Simply beautful and worth of reading
and rereading...
Thanks.
Ali
http://PostPoems.com/members/antar
2004-11-05 00:14:19  

 


Ruth Lovejoy
rlovejoy4@verizon.net


I really like this because it is heartfelt. When I got your em in my
verizon a/c I did not recognize you so deleted till I checked out
under members list at the site here.You can understand my reasoning.
Feel free to crituqe my work as well. I write on many topics..
http://PostPoems.com/members/poetrylady

2008-01-13 15:11:16 


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