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Pluck all the haters
pluck all the lazy ones
pluck all thier insecurities
and chuck them in the annointed abyss

pluck all the users
pluck all the misers
pluck all the losers
and call them to account and smash their egos in

pluck all the rumours
pluck all that defiles
pluck all their foolshit
and jam it up thier hopeless selfish ends

pluck all the attacks
pluck all the misunderstanding
pluck all their false bravado
and hang them with thier ineptitude deftly

pluck all the envy
pluck all the deciet
pluck all the faker lies
and return your glance a glacier icy slice

pluck all the energy
pluck all the time
pluck all the effort
and love it gently putting it into a worthy vein

pluck all the venom
pluck all the conspiracy
pluck all the Haters
and swap all the first 2 words l's with h's read now

pluck all the last lastlines
pluck all the the last words
pluck all their meaning last to first.
and all will make sence when going back and understanding what I meant.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I like puzzles and poems. I darkly morphed the two with an issue I feel strongly about.

Candy Feast

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Theme Based Poems

yea im living in a world ; a world that doesnt seem that sweet ; but looking closer we can kinda get a taste for the treats ; and even though life can be sour i aint never eyed defeat ; cuz to me thats flirtin with death ; so its either a TWIX or treat ; im jus living my life CAREFREE trying to get that 100 GRAND ; ignoring them LEMON HEAD haters who dont seem to understand ; cuz wheather u live in hollywood or 5th AVE u can still make a stand ; telling (hershey) HER-SHE dont need no SUGAR DADDY as a PAYDAY plan ; but she wanna be a AIRHEAD and listen to these DUMDUMS ; instead of listening to a LIFE SAVOR who understands where she comes from ; cuz playing TIC TAC toe with ur life jus aint a good look ; wheather its sooner NOW OR LATER u jus gonna end up with the crooks ; & its been a struggle but i came from a ROCKY ROAD and been needed a FAST BREAK ; but im the type of niqqa whos vision goes beyond outter space ; pass our ORBIT and pass the MILKYWAY ; i make the STARS-BURST as i go my successful way ; and im the king of my path so dont try to slow me down ; cuz with my TRIDENT in hand u gonna know who wheres the crown ; dum fool ; u try to act tuff but u as soft as a GUMMY BEAR ; jus a over grown CRYBABY thats needs to go back to daycare ; & im tired of these fake SNICKERS who wanna pretend they MR GOODBAR ; lying to peoples faces trying to to hide who they really are ; when in reality they nothing but a little SOUR PATCH KID tryna live a double life ; its pathethic and type sad how they only see things in black and white ; cuz life aint sugar free so it doesnt have to be that way ; u jus have to enjoy the little things in life and ignor those SOUR SPRAYS ; & u will see that when the ECLISP is over u'll finally find ur gem ; so stop trying to act slim and shady cuz u aint no M&M (eminem) ; & when u finally go to college and hang around with the SMARTIES and NERDS ; u gonna see life as a new definition u cant explain in words ; cuz life is full of candy just there for the taking ; it just all rest upon who u are as a person & ur decision making . .

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Author's Notes/Comments: 

The Theme in this poem is candy ; i used 29 candies i think l i capitalized the candies i used in the poem ; see how many i used

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