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Past The Point of No Return

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Past the point of no return
Is the point where soul will burn.
The heart no longer has a will
The blood, the mind, they beat, then still.
Death is the point of no return
And they who pass; for life they yearn.
Those of us who battles still wage
Should continue to fight through life's next page
For if we give in, I think you'll find
We're already dead, at least in mind.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Previous comment to Thunderbear. 

An Angel In Our Lives

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Everyone needs an angel in their life....

Otherwise it's hard to live

And without an angel in our life

Everything seems relative

Love is the greatest gift

Love is also a treasure

And when it's given from the heart

 

It cannot then be measured.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Prior comment to Snow. Enjoy.

Firefly

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Fly, fly firefly
your time is quickly passing by
Th storm is raging, racing, fly
One rain drop and you might die
So fly away firefly
Light the world, no need to cry
For I will see your light and I
Will remember, Firefly.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Part of a comment written to Simply.Savannah. Enjoy

I Am Of The Few

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As I sit, and I pray

I watch the sun bring a new day

I grieve for those so far lost

In their ways; high is the cost

Would it not be better, can they not see

The love Almighty God has given to me?

But the way is narrow to his place

And as I look into His face

I see the sorrow, His crying there

For His children who no longer care

I left you Lord! I spat in your face

I followed evil, my disgrace

It was not placed on me, my decision

Had set me up for Hell's derision

Then you took my place, your first born

The sun rose on my new morn

Now here am I, white and new

Living here, with your few

But I still grieve for those lost

For their decisions have such a cost

Eternal death away from you

 

Thank God that I am of your few.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Another old comment, that I wrote for Envy. Now is time to publish it again.

Admonition

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Heed wisdom's voice

Listen to her call

All of love's a choice

And one must take the fall.

 

Our choices will make us

Into who we will become

Even though pain break us

And leave our hearts so numb.

 

So do not hate the choice

Though playing's easily seen

Heed now Present's voice

Not what the past has been.  

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Originally a comment I wrote for Cassiebee, now remembered here.

A PLACE WIHOUT LOVE!!!

A place without love

A heart turned so bitter so cold a heart that was once bold full of love and cherished thoughts a heart that was fully stomped dragged in the mud without a thought this pure heart was in a drought no sun to shine and make it smile just drug around by the devil’s child crumbled heart without a smile inside of a humbled child this child has felt so much pain he cried enough to make his own rain nowhere  to go no love to find all this dragging turned him blind my lord oh why must I cry why must I suffer I only want to be loved I’m tired of all this hurting my son you are okay he would tell the young one to pray let me have your stress and you shall worry less no love and no place is temporary if you give me grace I will take all your pain away my son you shall believe and a blessing you will receive if you must give me grief your tears is called relief no it’s the best but my love will have you fully blessed don’t worry about a place without love because this struggle I will put above so pray to me my son and I’ll give you forgiveness in return................shall be continued………..

                   Sincerely,

 

                             Eli carter

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Come Away

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Love

Come away with me sweetheart

I pray thee, come away

For I do fear that my sore heart

Perchance could pass today

 

How could I live without your love

How could I still move on

I'll sit upon good God's sweet earth

And wait until the dawn

 

For when the dawn should end at last

The sun will bleach my bones

And I shall travel to a land

That no-one's ever owned

 

But when I shall arrive in there

I'll still be all alone

And pine away for my sweet love

And cry all on my own

 

Come away with me sweetheart

I pray thee, come away

For I do fear that I may pass

At any given day

Three Kings

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Light and Dark

I sit upon my throne at night

and stare into the dark

Two other chairs are sitting there

And stare into my heart

The candle flickers in the room

Only it's light shines

I sit and wait there for the Queen

and Joker here tonight

 

The time has come, 3-3-3

And I stare straight ahead

Two other forms are in the room

The fear goes to my head

I ask my questions, they, their answers

Stare into the room

I dare not look directly at them

I dare not risk my doom

 

For tonight, in my study

Dark council quietly sits

Three kings,differed kingdoms

I strain to keep my wits

My questions have been answered

Blown candle enters gloom

Turn the lights on brightly

 

Alone inside my room

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Based on the Three Kings Ritual, from tradition, popularized by Creepypasta.

Rest Now Honored Soldier

Rest now honored soldier

Put your burdens down

The end of watch has come

Trade your sorrows for a crown

Take all these earthly worries

Bury in the ground

Finally relieved

No more honor bound

 

Rest now honored soldier

The battle there is won

Your oath now here is finished

Your trials now are done

We grieve for you o' soldier

But in service we're content

The innocent protected

The evil finally rent

 

Rest now honored soldier

And though is lost your name

Raise high your head

Do not bow in shame

You have received greatest honor

In Valhalla you have claim

Rest now honored soldier

Content in your acclaim

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Here rests in honored glory an American soldier known but to God.

Requescat in pace, militem honorem.

For: "The Unknown Soldier"