Hey All, I've never written a poem in my life. I met this lady a couple of months ago at the establishment I got a new job at. She was my trainer and now we work side by side. She is the most caring, sweet & beautiful women that I ever met(and i'm 47). I know there are more than friend feelings between us because we both take time each day to make each other happy. I want to bring breakfast in for her & attach this poem to it. Like I mentioned b4 i'm not a poet & need your advice if you think its good enuff to give her.
New Song Idea Mostly Acoustic Set, Some bass, low chords, 2 seconds between acoustic riffs. Edit sounds between the 2 second intervals. Edit towards the end of the song bass gets heavier and louder and drums kick in beats. Maybe elec. Guitar added at very end as well along with synths.
