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redbrick commented on: Tanka Thought by Pungus 16 weeks 3 days ago
Most welcome, P: Most welcome, P
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Pungus commented on: Tanka Thought by Pungus 16 weeks 3 days ago
Ah, why thank you, my kind: Ah, why thank you, my kind sir!!
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Bazoora commented on: The Same Moon by Bazoora 16 weeks 6 days ago
Thank you. I live with her: Thank you. I live with her now. :D
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redbrick commented on: Tanka Thought by Pungus 16 weeks 6 days ago
Totally relatable and crisply: Totally relatable and crisply resonant 
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redbrick commented on: permission by redbrick 16 weeks 6 days ago
I like that you went cosmic: I like that you went cosmic with it! There’s something in the poem’s motion that invites that kind of constellation‑mapping. For me, though, the piece was working more in the realm of tempo rather than trajectory. But I appreciate the Sagittarius drift which is interesting to see how the poem’s internal movement reads from the outside. Much enjoyed engagement 
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Pungus commented on: permission by redbrick 16 weeks 6 days ago
Sagittarius: An astrological acknowledgement, on the nuances of how to love properly... I pictured a sort of "connecting of cosmic dots," as it were, or perhaps a pulling of constellations... What's the one with the bow and arrow? Another extension of Orion? Bleh.
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Stephen commented on: TWO DOORS by Stephen 16 weeks 6 days ago
Thank You: This was a delusion i suffered in the hospital while doped up on morphine. Or was it a delusion?
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ramonathompsont commented on: TWO DOORS by Stephen 16 weeks 6 days ago
short but powerful. could: short but powerful. could almost see the Grim Reaper stalking forward
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Pungus commented on: Tanka Time by Pungus 17 weeks 16 hours ago
That's a nice way of looking: That's a nice way of looking at it; a tiddybit dorky though *wink* or needlessly assuming
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Pungus commented on: laundry smells by Pungus 17 weeks 16 hours ago
Nothing of the sort…: Thank you SSmoothie; it's good to see you again... Sorry for the delayed response; this site has been acting slow for me; and, mostly out of dull curiosity, I pose the following question: Is this site acting slowly for you, as well? Thanks in advance (lol)
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redbrick commented on: THERE AT CALVARY by beaconzbard 17 weeks 5 days ago
Calvary is indeed the face of: Calvary is indeed the face of Grace, a bittersweet divine embrace.
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ramonathompsont commented on: Cutting Cords by maybethepoet 17 weeks 6 days ago
makes good song lyrics.: makes good song lyrics.
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ramonathompsont commented on: Find me in my Freedom. by starlover2103 17 weeks 6 days ago
Love this! Way to believe in: Love this! Way to believe in yourself and your inner power!
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ramonathompsont commented on: Findloveonline.com by Teytonon 18 weeks 1 day ago
good one. captured online: good one. captured online love and dating perfectly
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ramonathompsont commented on: THE STAIN by starlover2103 18 weeks 1 day ago
Reminds me of Lady Mcbeth.: Reminds me of Lady Mcbeth. Out damn spot! Out!   Very well done!
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