I like that you went cosmic: I like that you went cosmic with it! There’s something in the poem’s motion that invites that kind of constellation‑mapping. For me, though, the piece was working more in the realm of tempo rather than trajectory. But I appreciate the Sagittarius drift which is interesting to see how the poem’s internal movement reads from the outside. Much enjoyed engagement
Sagittarius: An astrological acknowledgement, on the nuances of how to love properly... I pictured a sort of "connecting of cosmic dots," as it were, or perhaps a pulling of constellations... What's the one with the bow and arrow? Another extension of Orion? Bleh.
Nothing of the sort…: Thank you SSmoothie; it's good to see you again... Sorry for the delayed response; this site has been acting slow for me; and, mostly out of dull curiosity, I pose the following question: Is this site acting slowly for you, as well? Thanks in advance (lol)
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