thank you so much for your: thank you so much for your feedback. Not a mother. This was a fictional piece but I am glad it touched someone which is what I intended. all the best.
R
Wow so touching : This was very touching to read about your struggles.
We have all been there remember one thing.
Your heath is more important then a job.
. No life no job
keep pushing and stay positive it will get better soon.....
weepingwoman, you been sleeping?: weepingwoman, you been sleeping?
up with changes, you must be keeping
you say you're a dot, like to be put to good use
crazy I'm not, unless there's a screw loose
aren't you a part of every website that's existed?
I find it very hard to believe you missed it
gotta run, more time to spend here I don't got
have a nice day, I guess dot's dot
Poetry: One sees in this poem that you really can write beautiful, insightful sensitive poetry. Why wast you time on protest songs when you can write this kind of poetry. Oh well. Just my opinion. However, there is a deep compliment in tha comment.
Only now it’s funny?: Only now it's funny? Then it wasn't funny? I just created it this morning! Wow, life is getting too fast paced for me. Thank you for your kind words.
If I was asked..: If I was asked to compare you
To what you don't got
Wouldn't want to share you
Definitely not
Please pay attention
I need you to listen
Don't you feel blue
She got no pot to piss in
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