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pamschwetz commented on: IRISH STEW AND MOUNTAIN DEW by pamschwetz 7 weeks 2 days ago
WORKS BOTH WAYS: OFCOURSE I NOTICED IT WORKS BOTH WAYS WHEN I WROTE IT. I RARELY REWRITE MY POEMS. I LIKE TO LEAVE THEM AS THEY COME TO ME. AS YOU SAY IT WORKS BOTH WAYS AND THAT IS THE WAY I CHOSE TO LEAVE  IT. THERE ARE A FEW INTERESTING COLLABS I DID WITH A COUPLE OF FRIENDS THAT ARE ABSTRACT POEMS THAT REALLY WORK BOTH WAYS IN AN INTERESTING WAY. YOU CAN READ THEM FROM THE FIRST LINE TO THE LAST OR  FROM THE LAST LINE TO THE FIRST AND  THEY ALL WORK BOTH WAYS...INTERESTING PHENOMENON. THEY ARE CALLED COSMIC ELECTRIC COLLECTIVE UNCONSCIOUS, STRAIGHT FROM THE HORSES MOUTH AND  IF YOU DON'T BELIEVE ME. I BELIEVE THEY ARE ALL ON THE SECOND TO THE LAST PAGE OF MY POEMS...I JUST LOOKED FOR THEM PRETTY RECENTLY TO SHARE AGAIN AND WHEN I DID I PUT THE LINKS FOR THE OTHER TWO POEMS IN THE  COMMENTS SO IF YOU FIND ONE YOU WILL HAVE FOUND ALL THREE WITH THE LINKS FOR ALL OF THEM.     I AM SHARING THE LINKS FOR ALL THREE IN THE ORDER THEY WERE WRITTEN IN HERE... I SEARCHED FOR THEM HERE IS THE LINK TO THE FIRST ONE THAT  HAS THE LINKS TO THE OTHER TWO ON THE COMMENTS OF IT... COSMIC ELECTRIC COLLECTIVE UNCONSCIOUS THE NEXT IN ORDER IS  STRAIGHT FROM THE HORSES MOUTH AND THEN THE LAST OF THE THREE IS AND IF YOU DON'T BELIEVE ME...ENJOY https://postpoems.org/authors/pamschwetz/poem/690684 https://postpoems.org/authors/pamschwetz/poem/690640 https://postpoems.org/authors/pamschwetz/poem/690654
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djtj commented on: IRISH STEW AND MOUNTAIN DEW by pamschwetz 7 weeks 2 days ago
What a short fun ditty: You may have played around with the postion of Combination and compliation. Would it also sound great IRISH STEW AND MOUNTAIN DEW WHAT A COMPLIATION LIKE THE RHYME BUT NOT INCLINED TO TASTE THAT COMBINATION. Thanks for the cheery poem and somehow that kind sounds ok together though a beer would be more in line. Hope you dont mind my fooling with your poem. Debbie J 
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ramonathompsont commented on: Hazel eyes I could by GeneConner2008 7 weeks 3 days ago
very nice, hope you find out: very nice, hope you find out what is behind those eyes.
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catclo15 commented on: Brawl with a bear by catclo15 7 weeks 6 days ago
Indeed, this is about a: Indeed, this is about a bully. 
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raven_hair commented on: (EROTIC) "The Perfect Storm" by raven_hair 8 weeks 11 hours ago
The Perfect Storm (raven_hair): Just wish it would last forever lol.  
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redbrick commented on: he does not flinch by redbrick 8 weeks 1 day ago
Thank you so much. Flinching: Thank you so much. Flinching is a very promordial test of fortitude so im glad it made it across.  Most appreciated
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ramonathompsont commented on: he does not flinch by redbrick 8 weeks 1 day ago
love those last two: love those last two lines!   Very poweful!
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ramonathompsont commented on: A BABY'S SMILE by joy 8 weeks 1 day ago
very sweet. a pleasure to: very sweet. a pleasure to read in an often too cruel world.
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QuirkyQuag commented on: Meeting The One by QuirkyQuag 8 weeks 3 days ago
True: This is why I don't consider any of my past relationahips as "failures". They existed so I could find my true self and eventually my true 'other'.
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redbrick commented on: where worlds meet by redbrick 8 weeks 3 days ago
Many thanks: many thanks Ramona. Sometimes there is nothing else worth chasing. Most appreciative.
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Teytonon commented on: Anyone hear from the newlyweds? by Teytonon 8 weeks 3 days ago
Thanks so much..: Thanks so much for your comment. I once dated a blonde  Who was in a bind That's where you would find her I was blind Couldn't read her mind I'd end up in a binder far behind her Be well.
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ramonathompsont commented on: where worlds meet by redbrick 8 weeks 3 days ago
Love this! short but so: Love this! short but so powerful! always chase those dreams!
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ramonathompsont commented on: Meeting The One by QuirkyQuag 8 weeks 6 days ago
From every failed romance we: From every failed romance we learn another lesson in life. Great job!
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redbrick commented on: Anyone hear from the newlyweds? by Teytonon 9 weeks 15 hours ago
Now there's a bind. Your: Now there's a bind. Your talent for language sounds shines through!
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Ben_ commented on: I Would Be by Ben_ 9 weeks 19 hours ago
Thank you... : ): Thank you... : )
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