Rubber bands found round the: Rubber bands found round the heels of some chick's heels!, hahahha, reminds me of when I used a lazer to snipe some dude's eyes from across a diner
Oh David—
fragmented: Oh David—
fragmented audacity,
your eternal endeavors
scatter like constellations,
a smirking paradox
at the edge of space,
dilemma turned orbit,
still pulling us near.
How darkness lurks in:
How darkness lurks in perceivable beauty!
Where touch feels more like violation than intimacy.
The disillusioned cry: "I never wished for this."
Where something harmful is veiled as sacred-
it truly takes courage and strength to voice out unwanted realities.
oh my: I can still feel that gut punch re-reading this piece. It's amazing that even after years of healing those physical sensory memories are still so strong.
First up, the title just: First up, the title just sings the song! And it's heart: "love, once thought eternal, has ended, leaving only grief, memories, and scars."
It captures the paradox of heartbreak and its desire to move on versus the inability to let go. The repeated refrain of “tears on the floor” embodies a raw, uncontainable sorrow of someone had left behind. Truly moved.
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