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Pungus commented on: Rubber Band by Jesster 3 weeks 4 days ago
Rubber bands found round the: Rubber bands found round the heels of some chick's heels!, hahahha, reminds me of when I used a lazer to snipe some dude's eyes from across a diner
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Jesster commented on: Eat with your head, not over it by Teytonon 3 weeks 4 days ago
oh my: I don't think lalapalooza will keep her away from drugs though.  :/ 
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Stephen commented on: Without uh Tracy by Teytonon 3 weeks 4 days ago
Still doing your thing--Ha Ha.: .
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redbrick commented on: draw us into orbit by redbrick 3 weeks 4 days ago
Oh David— fragmented: Oh David— fragmented audacity, your eternal endeavors scatter like constellations, a smirking paradox at the edge of space, dilemma turned orbit, still pulling us near.  
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Pursia commented on: draw us into orbit by redbrick 3 weeks 4 days ago
Oh, David, the sheer: Oh, David, the sheer fragmented audacity of your eternal endeavors, a space-petty smirking dilemma!!
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Pursia commented on: Little Tinctures by Pungus 3 weeks 4 days ago
It's pretty much insane how: It's pretty much insane how spot on you are...
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redbrick commented on: Little Tinctures by Pungus 3 weeks 4 days ago
  How darkness lurks in:   How darkness lurks in perceivable beauty!  Where touch feels more like violation than intimacy. The disillusioned cry: "I never wished for this." Where something harmful is veiled as sacred- it truly takes courage and strength to voice out unwanted realities.
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Jesster commented on: Swamp by Jesster 3 weeks 5 days ago
I beleive: you are right about that!
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Pursia commented on: Swamp by Jesster 3 weeks 5 days ago
I believe that is what most: I believe that is what most poets may call an affect of madness
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Jesster commented on: Swamp by Jesster 3 weeks 5 days ago
The cosmic joke: This cosmic joke isn't funny. Yet, it's also, somehow, hilarious.
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Jesster commented on: Gut Punch by Jesster 3 weeks 5 days ago
oh my: I can still feel that gut punch re-reading this piece. It's amazing that even after years of healing those physical sensory memories are still so strong. 
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redbrick commented on: Tears on the Floor by elliot_jordan2003 3 weeks 6 days ago
First up, the title just: First up, the title just sings the song! And it's heart: "love, once thought eternal, has ended, leaving only grief, memories, and scars." It captures the paradox of heartbreak and its desire to move on versus the inability to let go. The repeated refrain of “tears on the floor” embodies a raw, uncontainable sorrow of someone had left behind. Truly moved.
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elliot_jordan2003 commented on: Nowhere fast by clutchforbalance 3 weeks 6 days ago
Thanks for sharing.: I love how you made the visualization seem so real. Nicely done catching the audience and engaging in your writing.
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elliot_jordan2003 commented on: Will I ever find true love by elliot_jordan2003 3 weeks 6 days ago
Wow: Wow thank you so much. Through all the hurt I find inspiration to write.
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redbrick commented on: behind each step by redbrick 3 weeks 6 days ago
Thank you so much.: Thank you so much. JessterStarshine! You are most appreciated 
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