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LittleLennonGurl commented on: No New Wars? by LittleLennonGurl 5 weeks 4 days ago
Hell yeah!!: Always!!!!
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LittleLennonGurl commented on: Darkness Forming, Madness Conforming by LittleLennonGurl 5 weeks 4 days ago
Now that I think about it.: You're right, it's better as a poem.
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Jimi_Mayhem commented on: From The Core of My Heart by twyllamedina 5 weeks 4 days ago
Beautiful : Beautiful
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redbrick commented on: where the reed faun grows by redbrick 5 weeks 4 days ago
Thanks again. The poem "the: Thanks again. The poem "the day they carried " was meant to follow. Perhaps it would pass as a sequel. 
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redbrick commented on: point of bliss by redbrick 5 weeks 4 days ago
That's nice to hear. Thanks: That's nice to hear. Thanks for making you so much. It truly means a lot 
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: where the reed faun grows by redbrick 5 weeks 5 days ago
Beautiful!  And I mean . . . : Beautiful!  And I mean . . .  BEAUTIFUL!  And it calls for a sequel.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: point of bliss by redbrick 5 weeks 5 days ago
-I think this is very much a: -I think this is very much a philosophical poem, right up there with the best of Wallace Stevens.
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Craign1979 commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Nani In Socks, Naked With Just His Socks On [XLIX] by S74rw4rd-13d 6 weeks 20 hours ago
Been doing well. Married life: Been doing well. Married life suits me and i'm being more open and feeling free with the help of my wife. 
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Nani In Socks, Naked With Just His Socks On [XLIX] by S74rw4rd-13d 6 weeks 20 hours ago
Thank you very, very much! : Thank you very, very much!  And how have you been?
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Craign1979 commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Nani In Socks, Naked With Just His Socks On [XLIX] by S74rw4rd-13d 6 weeks 20 hours ago
Wow: Wow... Hotly erotic. Very nice work
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redbrick commented on: descent by redbrick 6 weeks 1 day ago
Both angles valid and: Both angles valid and required. So it's all for us to be glad of them being thusly so 
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redbrick commented on: they come asking, again by redbrick 6 weeks 1 day ago
That is why the next poem was: That is why the next poem was an attempt to clarify the pronoun-shenanigans
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Pungus commented on: they come asking, again by redbrick 6 weeks 1 day ago
The shift from pronouns makes: The shift from pronouns makes for an interesting riddle: who's who? I like how the 'you' seems to address both the narrator and audience simultaneously.
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Pungus commented on: descent by redbrick 6 weeks 1 day ago
Yes, I see precisely what you: Yes, I see precisely what you mean, the message we sense in the final stanza there especially draws that contrast; whereas mine may be patriarchal, yours is much more positive.
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redbrick commented on: blotting pad by Pungus 6 weeks 2 days ago
Quite a complement to the: Quite a complement to the poem: "descent"; it's the other side of that coin and its opposite sound. 
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