line of thinking

—'Tis More Fun Using

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

—'Tis More Fun Using

 

 

'Tis more fun using

—money in my pocket, but

I know where it's from...

From other people's pockets

I'm now on top of the world

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Reedited 09.04.2019:

 

I simply have italicized the whole English idiomatic expression "on top of the world" rather than just "top of the world" which previously thought to be enough to emphasize, or to denote, what I wanted to signify.  I only had the ample chance to finally correct this [idiom] now (even though I had always wanted to correct this sentence & to modify it as soon as possible.  Just because I thought it was not sounding right, & the fact that what had just played in my mind back when I was composing this was seeming to just correspond to a familiar song, something out of a Carpenter's song & its title, I had come to the conclusion that it was indeed an American/English idiomatic expression that relates to its real connotation (where the expression was actually derived, & whose real lexical meaning was what I also have meant to relay).  Thank you for reading on.

 

 

Silvery Appearing On Dark

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Silvery Appearing On Dark

 

 

 

Why like this—are we

While you're lying on the ground

Bedstead hovering









Author's Notes/Comments: 

This poem is reedited on 07.12.2019.

 

A replacement/substitution of a specific phrase "bed base" to the word "bedstead" was made unto the last line to properly denote what I had in mind earlier on.  I wanted to achieve something that I formerly thought would better represent those ideas (the intended imagery which was originally imprinted in my mind/thoughts during my initial creative process).  The specific word was not known to myself yet, or I also have no exact vocabulary word for that specific thought.  Neither do I know really how to call it, up until this point, because of the many specified ways to call something that resembles a type of a bed. This poem, therefore, might be tentative for that reason (due to the limited vocabulary words that I possess & for yet clarifying such undetermined objects in my mind).  Thank you for reading on.