axiology

—'Tis More Fun Using

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

—'Tis More Fun Using

 

 

'Tis more fun using

—money in my pocket, but

I know where it's from...

From other people's pockets

I'm now on top of the world

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Reedited 09.04.2019:

 

I simply have italicized the whole English idiomatic expression "on top of the world" rather than just "top of the world" which previously thought to be enough to emphasize, or to denote, what I wanted to signify.  I only had the ample chance to finally correct this [idiom] now (even though I had always wanted to correct this sentence & to modify it as soon as possible.  Just because I thought it was not sounding right, & the fact that what had just played in my mind back when I was composing this was seeming to just correspond to a familiar song, something out of a Carpenter's song & its title, I had come to the conclusion that it was indeed an American/English idiomatic expression that relates to its real connotation (where the expression was actually derived, & whose real lexical meaning was what I also have meant to relay).  Thank you for reading on.

 

 

Criteria Of The Fallen (An Affected Poem)











Criteria Of The Fallen

 

 

 


 

We are judged, not by how softly or

well meaning we have dealt with

each other's foibles alone

 

 

But we are immeasurably judged anyhow by -

the companies we join, families that we have,

friends with which we tag/go along

 

 

Almost assuredly our minds are

measured too, by some type of

psychometrics


 

But I would never understand

the mind of corruption,

the ways of crime, perhaps

 

 

People fighting off their men.

In the future, chopping off their heads—

if the right conditions shall be given

 

 

Over pedophilia, war profiteering,

orgiastic incontinence;

as if gluttonous craving.

 

 

—Only God will judge;


—in heaven.












Author's Notes/Comments: 

"Criteria Of The Fallen", an admittedly affected poem, was written on 04/19/2017 at around 02:29 A.M.  Compared to the raw/original version in my Twitter platform, this one is an edited version (just the form/stanzas having been tweaked a little bit). Thank you for looking!