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These are the lyrics to a new song I'm working. I would love any kind of feedback so I know that what I'm trying to convey is getting across. 

Very old one that never felt finished until recently.  Hope it's not too sappy. Written on 6/24/03, updated 7/21/23.

KINDA OUT THERE LYRICS

One of the many songs in book 4 that I'm currently working on.

Dedicated to Vlad Tepes. Plunging the depths of another Black Mass to execute dimensions of blindlight. No god stands before Myself. Bow before the glory of The Satanist!

THE STATE OF THE WORLD WE LIVE IN...SOMETHING'S GOTTA CHANGE... NOW A SONG ON YOUTUBE...CATCHY TUNE....CHECK IT OUT....LIKE,COMMENT,SHARE...THANKS  https://youtu.be/n7uEIlDv0TI

Blasphemous scenario of sacriligeous horror! sesuj & mary enslaved & possessed by demons in the manger, proceed with an orgy of damnation! Symbolic and literal descriptions. Remember to follow that Pentagram! [Coincides with SHADOW GALLERY: Immaculate Defecation]

I am doing a sync songwriting workshop and part of our homework was to do a brain dump for lyrics that would work for sync. I thought of the topic of overcoming. I am not a brain dump type person...that method doesn't work for me...my stuff comes more on autopilot so I did this for the assignment...I give myself permission to do things that work for me...

About a love that you cannot get out of your mind, heart, and soul.