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Jesster commented on: Good Girl by Jesster 4 days 15 hours ago
Some wounds reopen an bleed out: Healing seems a constant 
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Teytonon commented on: Good Girl by Jesster 5 days 37 min ago
One definition of..: One definition of obedient = O bed I ent er.. Some scars take a lifetime to heal. Some never do. Hope you are well.
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Teytonon commented on: The story of Val by Teytonon 5 days 5 hours ago
Hi. Thanks for..: Hi. Thanks for responding. Yes, that's the reason, to the eye may not look pleasin' Though it's grammatically incorrect  A correction don't expect  Nice to hear from you. Take care.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Canvas by vatchejames 5 days 8 hours ago
This is excellent, but that: This is excellent, but that final stanza soars to the skies in a triumph of real poetic language.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Maestro by vatchejames 5 days 8 hours ago
This is a brilliant use of: This is a brilliant use of language and metaphor!!!!!
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: DAILY GRATITUDE BOOKS by joy 5 days 8 hours ago
Also excellent!!!: Also excellent!!!
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: TO ALL THE BOOK BANNERS OUT THERE by joy 5 days 8 hours ago
Excellent and timely!: Excellent and timely!
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: The story of Val by Teytonon 5 days 9 hours ago
Not sure of its: Not sure of its function---just to make the rhyme?
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Teytonon commented on: The story of Val by Teytonon 6 days 7 hours ago
Regarding your comment..: Regarding your comment, about it what?
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: The story of Val by Teytonon 6 days 15 hours ago
In the first stanza, "she: In the first stanza, "she shoot he?"!!!!!!
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Teytonon commented on: The story of Val by Teytonon 1 week 22 hours ago
Thank you for your comment!..: Thank you for your comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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ramonathompsont commented on: The story of Val by Teytonon 1 week 1 day ago
lol cute. I liked this one: lol cute. I liked this one
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: JUDGMENT by Stephen 1 week 2 days ago
Vergil, Milton, and Eliot as: Vergil, Milton, and Eliot as well . . .
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jackabite commented on: I'll Never Give Up On You (Dedicated to Ashley) by jackabite 1 week 2 days ago
I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply: I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply; but definitely thank you for your kind words; I live every day, trying to live in a way that would make her smile, to not ever let her down, and I hope I've succeeded.
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Jimi_Mayhem commented on: You Can't Get Enough Of... by twyllamedina 1 week 3 days ago
That is pretty much exactly: That is pretty much exactly what it's like...hooked on her voice, her beauty, her smile, her laugh....
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