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allets commented on: Passion for Ships to Elba (Exiling The Sun) by lyrycsyntyme 5 years 5 weeks ago
Exile Metaphor: . We'll be back! A dimmer median Sol, enough to grow kids under. For as long as the climate stays in our living range.  
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allets commented on: Ode To Space Forces Rising by lyrycsyntyme 5 years 5 weeks ago
Or Air To Breathe: Landed eagle, just in case that earth thing doesn't work out. Vampire eagles? okay. :)
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allets commented on: That Statue Turned Green (Long Ago) by lyrycsyntyme 5 years 5 weeks ago
Excellent Images American: . Lady Liberty was a great idea, then world cruelty sent brown people to the gates. Biden has Merkle syndrimr - doors open: Here we go DACA and here over a decade: Make em new citizens in time to vote in 2012 hmmmm... Lady Liberty learnd Espanole! ~S~. Well writ lines. Enjoyed artistry and perspective.
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allets commented on: RIMBAUD'S HELL by georgeschaefer 5 years 5 weeks ago
Great Sumation Line: You forgot to mention all 8 winders...or is it 10 now? cupid is just a bad shot! :)
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allets commented on: HOPI SURVIVAL AND ACID DREAMS by georgeschaefer 5 years 5 weeks ago
Very 1984: My copy is on the Cedar chest - waiting for me to finish Ellis's Summer of the Danes - a Brother Cadfael mystery. (Put down Game of Thrones Storm of Swords. Had to clean house and stuff. Read a few star trek novels. Been eyeing unread Tom Clancy's.. To be is to think (And to read)! . ~S~ . 
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allets commented on: Goodbye My Friend by forsakenkalika 5 years 5 weeks ago
"Smiling Cheshire, screaming Alice...": A few years ago I re- read Wonderland/Looking Glassp...a trip. Love lost writing - like dear jane letters. Hope all is well. ~Stella~ 
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allets commented on: Snowflakes by forsakenkalika 5 years 5 weeks ago
Shattered Innocense: The sass, the meloncholy, the refusal to regret - to live each word - I marvel (as usual) - Happy Holidays. ~A~ . Re-absorbed: So much emoting jammed in each line. Magnificent composing! ~S~ .  
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allets commented on: The Alternative by forsakenkalika 5 years 5 weeks ago
A Kernel For Your Thoughts: I wish Kalika would give us a grain or two more - but she says everything so well in what she has elected to share. I'm glad you read her too. I read her and learn (not easy). She is a gem, a pearl or a diatom, jury is still out (smile) ~~A~~   Re-absorbed this again 02-21-21 on my Birthday! A great voice. ~ Lady A
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williamjroneyiii commented on: Turn The Other Cheek by williamjroneyiii 5 years 5 weeks ago
Turn the other cheek: God Bless
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saiom commented on: Bus Ride Revised by williamjroneyiii 5 years 5 weeks ago
  You paint such a positive:   You paint such a positive word picture that Greyhound or another bus co. might want you to create their ads...
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saiom commented on: Turn The Other Cheek by williamjroneyiii 5 years 5 weeks ago
  You have very kind eyes...:   You have very kind eyes... and your poem too is full of goodness  
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saiom commented on: Two years and Two weeks by Unseen.warfare 5 years 5 weeks ago
  Nearly all of us have:   Nearly all of us have addictions... even meat is addicitve from the trioxypurie or uric acid in it which is stronger than caffeine or dioxypurine   your poem is powerful   victory for you and for the 90% of the world which is addicted to drugs or food or sex or video games or tv etc etc
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word_man commented on: Killing You by Dont_punch_grandpa 5 years 5 weeks ago
some tough love here: some tough love here
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sweetwater commented on: While The Days Are Short by lyrycsyntyme 5 years 5 weeks ago
This is such a lovely poem it: This is such a lovely poem it really drew me in, I wish I could have walked there. sue.
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patriciajj commented on: My Gods by rachel 5 years 5 weeks ago
Amazing. Delivered with: Amazing. Delivered with self-evident clarity and power, this is an example of how a cyclone of emotion can arise from a soft breeze of language. I connected, deeply, to every flawless line. So moving. 
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