Matter With A Will: .
Choice determines the state in which matter articulates. Astonishment, like awe and faith, presuppose confidence in surrounding matter in perpetual flux. While choice exists inside or against impossibly enormous motion, life can evolve. Stagnancy and harsh systems of limitation causing arrest as stillness without options is the beginning of inertia as devolution. This poem is the affirmation and essence of wonder.
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Good writ here.
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Bus Ride:
Your close enough, I took a trip on a private bus " Motor Home "
from San Antonio Texas through the west Texas desert to
Sierra Vista Arizona and back. El Paso was during rush hour!
Loving the "wise lilac bush": Loving the "wise lilac bush" and the earth as a demonstration of resurrection. A profound and surging viewpoint, with some fascinating notes and heartwarming memories as well. A beautiful addition to the challenge.
A dreamy and tender love poem: A dreamy and tender love poem that reaches deep within, acknowledging the source of love and placing your devotion in the realm of destiny. Gorgeous! I would love to see more of your poems in English, since unfortunately, that's all I know. I wish I could read them in your native language; I can only imagine how superb they are in that form. You have a gift.
I really love this poem. And: I really love this poem. And the poem demonstrates that the two, who may have seemed small and nothing, were actually significant enough to be included in a poem with this degree of greatness---much more than small and nothing. This is one of the finest short poems I have read here in a long time.
Wow! The imagery of this: Wow! The imagery of this poem conveys an emotional profundity far greater than the small space occupied by these few lines---always a sign of classic talent.
Crushed: Ready for recycling one more time. I revise me every 5 years - short attention span - to renew brain functions. Time to start a press and publish poets, if legs work out spat with back - and world re-opens. Be fun!
Tin Can Uncrushed like Prometheus, the art giver, half blind fire thief.
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