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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Read the poem. Take the cannoli by Teytonon 3 weeks 6 days ago
You should, perhaps, cite the: You should, perhaps, cite the source of that character, since it is not yours.
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Stephen commented on: 33 by georgeschaefer 3 weeks 6 days ago
Comprende!!: .
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: senior formal (prom) by redbrick 3 weeks 6 days ago
Only a Poet of your quality: Only a Poet of your quality could obtain this significance from a Prom.
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ramonathompsont commented on: BABIES IN THE ROOM by joy 4 weeks 5 hours ago
doubtful. I think too many of: doubtful. I think too many of them are too far gone in their selfish ways and lust for power to care.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: more than scribbles by redbrick 4 weeks 20 hours ago
This is EXCELLENT metaphor!: This is EXCELLENT metaphor!
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redbrick commented on: loveless by Jesster 4 weeks 21 hours ago
This is very relatable and: This is very relatable and most resonant! In our picking up and moving on we often leave loves behind, hardly ever looking back after. 
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Dawn Broke by Craign1979 4 weeks 1 day ago
I applaud your strategic use: I applaud your strategic use of the phrase, "Dawn broke . . ." as an organizing pattern in the poem.
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Jesster commented on: A Bitter Taste by Jesster 4 weeks 1 day ago
Thank you: I wrote this for a dear friend who's going through it
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: At Peace by Craign1979 4 weeks 1 day ago
You VERY MUCH DESERVE this: You VERY MUCH DESERVE this great happiness.
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Teytonon commented on: I guess he beleives war isn't murder by Jesster 4 weeks 1 day ago
Ever since Cain and Abel..: Ever since Cain and Abel We've been unable to take war off the table  War is insanity  A part of humanity  To think otherwise is to believe in a fable   Saying a lot in a few. Thanks for sharing.
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Teytonon commented on: pig pen of words by redbrick 4 weeks 2 days ago
This poem showcases..: This poem showcases your substantial talent. The imagery that you bring to mind through phrases like 'roots in syllables, wallows in rhyme' shows a poet who knows how to use words in a most creative way. Well done.
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ramonathompsont commented on: A Bitter Taste by Jesster 4 weeks 2 days ago
pretty deep. well done.: pretty deep. well done.
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Jesster commented on: clod-flair by redbrick 4 weeks 2 days ago
yup: it reminded me of times logging into postpoems and the screen pulling up an error message
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Jesster commented on: clod-flair by redbrick 4 weeks 2 days ago
yup: it reminded me of times logging into postpoems and the screen pulling up an error message
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