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allets commented on: JOY IN THE HOUSE OF PAIN by chris 5 days 16 hours ago
Nice: Repetition and internal rhyme.
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DSR.Summar commented on: a warm rock... by DSR.Summar 5 days 17 hours ago
ommmmmmm~~~: Hey Thanks for the visit Stephen:)
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Starward commented on: DESTINY by Stephen 5 days 22 hours ago
I applaud the way you have: I applaud the way you have formatted the poem to reflect the brevity of our earthen existence: neither the poem nor the lines in it are lengthy, and this adds a subtle, silent emphasis that gives the poem additional power. Your strategy, here, reminds me of E. L. Masters' format in Spoon River Anthology---human lives encapsulated in brief epitaphs and a language that is more telegraphic than explanatory.  
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Stephen commented on: I’ve Got Things I Want by giajl 6 days 11 hours ago
At age 73, I know the feeling.: .
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Stephen commented on: a warm rock... by DSR.Summar 6 days 14 hours ago
Zen: .
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saiom commented on: Sathya Sai Baba by saiom 6 days 15 hours ago
  Thank you thank you... your:   Thank you thank you... your review made my day.. There is another Yogananda... Paramahansa Yogananda who wrote Autobiograpy of a Yogi... Steve Jobs directed that at his funeral copies of the book be passed out to all.. This particular Yogananda set up the first vegetarian restaurant in the US .. in Calif and served mushroom burgers..
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allets commented on: Morosely Maudlin by giajl 6 days 18 hours ago
Well Written Lament: Nicely penned pain-gloom. .    
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allets commented on: Epic Proportions by allets 6 days 21 hours ago
Thanks A Bunch Lady: I love mythology and folk tales. I hated history in school and now I can't get enough of dates and who did what when. No matter, great reading those old Norse, Greek, and Roman tales. - Love & Hugs - Lady A.
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Stephen commented on: Little Girl Inside of Me by Indya 1 week 16 min ago
Trust me.: You are not the omly one.
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deepblue commented on: Rock by deepblue 1 week 1 hour ago
You're too kind :) thank you : You're too kind :) thank you 
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Indya commented on: The buried, broken pieces by doktoravalanche 1 week 1 hour ago
Wow, this is really amazing: Wow, this is really amazing and speaks volumes.  Great job
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Starward commented on: So Rises The Old Woman From The Sea by Starward 1 week 3 hours ago
Thank you so much.  I had: Thank you so much.  I had hoped it would sound like a "haunted" poem, and I appreciate your understanding of it.
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Starward commented on: Breaking Out (Response to Allets' Winter to Spring Challenge) by patriciajj 1 week 3 hours ago
My pleasure to have read the: My pleasure to have read the poem!
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patriciajj commented on: So Rises The Old Woman From The Sea by Starward 1 week 3 hours ago
Ominous and breathtaking,: Ominous and breathtaking, this portrait emerges from an atmosphere of mystery "like the shadows lurking behind a shutter" and pathos . We hear a tragic, demented voice and we can't turn away. So many questions swirl in six power-packed lines and yet they don't. Somehow we know, and that is the magic of your artistry.   These are the remnants of a life, achingly sad as they are chilling.    Outstanding description and one hell of a title.     
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giajl commented on: Sadness fills my soul by giajl 1 week 4 hours ago
Resolutions : I published a couple of books on Amazon.
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