This is very relatable and: This is very relatable and most resonant! In our picking up and moving on we often leave loves behind, hardly ever looking back after.
Ever since Cain and Abel..: Ever since Cain and Abel
We've been unable to take war off the table
War is insanity
A part of humanity
To think otherwise is to believe in a fable
Saying a lot in a few. Thanks for sharing.
This poem showcases..: This poem showcases your substantial talent. The imagery that you bring to mind through phrases like 'roots in syllables, wallows in rhyme' shows a poet who knows how to use words in a most creative way. Well done.