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redbrick commented on: The Triangle by karlmcallister 5 weeks 5 days ago
Vertigo is no friend of hours: Vertigo is no friend of hours (sic) but time will tell.
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redbrick commented on: time’s no friend by redbrick 5 weeks 5 days ago
Indeed! And oftentimes a: Indeed! And oftentimes a useful alliance forged at others a dilemma of deadline or expiry proportions
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karlmcallister commented on: afterparty by redbrick 5 weeks 5 days ago
Nice!: Wow! What striking imagery, vulnerabke, sore and yet hopeful and full of possibility.    Thanks!
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karlmcallister commented on: CTRL + ALT + DLT by redbrick 5 weeks 5 days ago
Hmmm? I get Shakespearea: Hmmm? I get Shakespearea vibes....  Very easy to punch CTRL/ALT/DEL, yes.  Perhaps a little to easy?  Very ... laconic imagery!    With a bare bodkin? who would fardels bear,   To grunt and sweat under a weary life,   But that the dread of something after death,   The undiscover'd country from whose bourn   No traveller returns, puzzles the will   And makes us rather bear those ills we have   Than fly to others that we know not of? (Hamlet Act 3, Scene 1)
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karlmcallister commented on: time’s no friend by redbrick 5 weeks 5 days ago
no friend?: Ah, but time is literally all we have...
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redbrick commented on: Its never worse by SSmoothie 5 weeks 5 days ago
How the mind works or: How the mind works or doesn't; such a perplexity
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redbrick commented on: pulse by redbrick 5 weeks 5 days ago
Thanks kindly! Good to hear: Thanks kindly! Good to hear from you again
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SSmoothie commented on: Untethered Night by patriciajj 5 weeks 5 days ago
Perfect. Every word.: Perfect. Every word. Brilliant. Hugss 
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SSmoothie commented on: How a bill becomes law: 2025 by Teytonon 5 weeks 5 days ago
Yep. Is it working? Using a: Yep. Is it working? Using a new world order different but the same as the old new world order. A league of extraordinary gentlemen... hint hint...
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SSmoothie commented on: Yes, today by Teytonon 5 weeks 5 days ago
Yep. Good for flo, good for: Yep. Good for flo, good for you both can find something new. Cute poem. 
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SSmoothie commented on: Warrior by deepblue 5 weeks 5 days ago
Almost there... such great: Almost there... such great imagery and metaphor the structure begs for eleoqunce but, it gets caught on emotionalism and luckily it wins out. Something reL special here .
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SSmoothie commented on: pulse by redbrick 5 weeks 5 days ago
Beautifully expressed l, and: Beautifully expressed l, and maybe one day well green a parking lot and put up a paradise. Aussie? Oi oi oi... nice one. 
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C03rul3Sc3n7 commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Sijo For The Glide Of Their K-Pop Bare Feet [ /;\ ] by S74rw4rd157 5 weeks 6 days ago
Thank you so much for that. : Thank you so much for that.  I needed to write the sijo because Beauty is Beauty, whether among the stars or among the K-Pop boybands, and Poets' chief vocation---to be the Cosmos' voice as it explains itself to itself---includes declarations of Beauty.  And, if there is some young man whose given nature is like mine, perhaps the poem will help him embrace, rather than fear, his attractions.
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patriciajj commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Sijo For The Glide Of Their K-Pop Bare Feet [ /;\ ] by S74rw4rd157 5 weeks 6 days ago
Here, love meets the dance of: Here, love meets the dance of galaxies in your poetic craftsmanship. And it's magic. I'm hearing it and seeing it and simply reveling in the journey. One of your best! 
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redbrick commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, ὡσαννά 2 Peter 3:9 by S74rw4rd157 6 weeks 2 hours ago
Most welcome! It's good to be: Most welcome! It's good to be able to read and interact on spiritual matters.
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