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patriciajj commented on: Footnote: What Astronomers May Already Realize by S74RW4RD 3 weeks 1 day ago
This stunning contemplation: This stunning contemplation took the words right out of Infinite Mind and made it accessible to a broken, bewildered and hurting world.   The supreme message, cunningly transcribed for mortals, is a vindication for Poets such as yourself who have a deep understanding and reverence for the purpose, the power, of language. But with that power comes great responsibility and humanity, at this time, has defiled the sacred gift having "reduced it to frivolity or hatred".   That's a wrenching disappointment, especially in light of your expansive revelation of a Poet's Divine calling.   In the Poem's focal point, an avalanche of colossal, cosmic truth, it gets real and it feels like humanity is barred from a higher Eden:   ". . . that is why Love, Who is God, at this time bars us from a knowledge of the language shared among the stars"   Truly epic, instructive and ageless, gifted scribe of deeper reality. My respect!
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unspokenvoice commented on: 2008 by allets 3 weeks 2 days ago
the short sentence sizes show: the short sentence sizes show a bluntness a steady rythm like an anger but with clarity its very beautiful and clear while remaining pointed and emotion filled
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unspokenvoice commented on: This Poem Came To Me On My Last Day In The Hospital by S74RW4RD 3 weeks 2 days ago
sweet and swift like a cool: sweet and swift like a cool breeze very nice
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cynosure commented on: To Persephoné by arqios 3 weeks 2 days ago
Ouch!: This hits right in the feels. I had been trying EMDR to assist with my cPTSD however self care has always been problematic for me. Possibly due to being AuDHD. After a few attempts finally had some happy places to think on, only to have the harsh light of day show me the true reality. 
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patriciajj commented on: Unforgiven Rapture by patriciajj 3 weeks 3 days ago
That is the most generous,: That is the most generous, assuring and valuable word you could grant me. Thank you so much! 
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patriciajj commented on: In the quiet of the night by dhicks01 3 weeks 3 days ago
Your delicately gleaming,: Your delicately gleaming, euphorically beautiful style can be described by your own words:   "In the dance of ink and paper . . ."   There are poems that move us and there are poems that immerse us. This lilting, hypnotic love song does both, and with lines that could stand alone as timeless gems:   "Through the veil of the/ past, the future peers, In the silence of the moment, the/ universe hears."   What epic insight followed by the most jubilant celebration of unshakable love. This is how true devotion shines when crystallized in excellence.  
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Madmartigan commented on: Memorial Day by Teytonon 3 weeks 3 days ago
Yeah, we're thankful.: Yeah, we're thankful.
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georgeschaefer commented on: UNIQUE OR AT LEAST DISTINCTIVE by georgeschaefer 3 weeks 4 days ago
thank you kindly: thank you kindly
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S74rw4rd commented on: UNIQUE OR AT LEAST DISTINCTIVE by georgeschaefer 3 weeks 4 days ago
Although brief in structure,: Although brief in structure, this poem contains a profound depth of wisdom.
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dhicks01 commented on: Unforgiven Rapture by patriciajj 3 weeks 5 days ago
Excellent!: Your writing leaves me with one descriptive word, Excellent! Dennis Hicks
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beaconzbard commented on: MY PEACE AND JOY (ARE GONE) by beaconzbard 3 weeks 5 days ago
Thank you for your kind: Thank you for your kind words.  Hope you'll click the link in the Author's notes/comments section and listen to me sing it.
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S74rw4rd commented on: ramble by unspokenvoice 3 weeks 5 days ago
Thank you for that reply.: Thank you for that reply.
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unspokenvoice commented on: ramble by unspokenvoice 3 weeks 5 days ago
no worries most of my poems: no worries most of my poems are written in a sort of daze and i hit the wrong key when typing dozens of times haha
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S74rw4rd commented on: ramble by unspokenvoice 3 weeks 6 days ago
I apologize for the typo in: I apologize for the typo in the comment.  To the best of my recollection, it should have been "very brief block of time."  Sorry about that, I was very ill at the time I wrote it.
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weepingwoman commented on: Without a Paddle by weepingwoman 3 weeks 6 days ago
Can't wait to write more:D: Thanks for stoppin' by_()_
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