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patriciajj commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Botanical Metaphor [ /;\ ] by Starward 4 days 5 hours ago
With multilayered symbolism: With multilayered symbolism and highly-charged yet elegant tension, you created a beautiful merging, a soft collision. Brilliantly conceived.   
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patriciajj commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; He Slipped His Shoes Off During Class by Starward 4 days 5 hours ago
So many supreme works of: So many supreme works of wonder have popped up in your collection that I'm frustrated that I've been so busy and don't have time to explore them all. Each one deserves reflection, deep analysis and praise.   Here, you take what seems, on the surface, to be an ordinary scene, but under the surface, there are stories within stories about its significance. Anthony, with a simple, playful, demonstrative act, injected his own life-altering statement into the teacher's pat lecture and invited numerous interpretations, both sensual and delightfully subversive.   Highly meaningful nostalgia.
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patriciajj commented on: Postcards from Eons Past (Images from the James Webb Space Telescope) by patriciajj 4 days 6 hours ago
Thank you so much for: Thank you so much for appreciating my poem's structure. That's extremely reassuring coming from a wordcrafter I deeply admire. Your grasp of my vision and stunningly eloquent interpretation made my day. Peace and every blessing, brilliant poet.   
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DSR.Summar commented on: An Orison by DSR.Summar 4 days 18 hours ago
Thanks So Much Stephen! : Many Blessings _()_
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Stephen commented on: the earnest flower of hinterland by tula 4 days 18 hours ago
Excellent! : .
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Stephen commented on: An Orison by DSR.Summar 4 days 18 hours ago
Very beautifully crafted sentiments.: .
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sweetwater commented on: Musing In A Shady Wood. by sweetwater 4 days 21 hours ago
Thank you so much Wordman,: Thank you so much Wordman, it's amazing how the mind can show us something our eyes cannot see. sue.
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sweetwater commented on: At Last! by sweetwater 4 days 21 hours ago
Thank you, I wished for this: Thank you, I wished for this on a 'Blood Moon' many years ago, the wish was granted. Can't wait. :-)
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SSmoothie commented on: Postcards from Eons Past (Images from the James Webb Space Telescope) by patriciajj 4 days 22 hours ago
Wow! I really felt my spirit: Wow! I really felt my spirit move in for what is fir me two poems that could both stand in their own right!    From this gorgeous immaculate prologue:  Quantum particles or these  macro realms  like scattered jewels— each one a cluster of worlds, each one terrifying in its splendor, each one an epoch or epochs— it's all the same through the eyes of Spirit   Who showed us a day in the  life of forever,  and what a gift  to a teeming, questioning planet to rewind millennia and peer into the impossible:   Ravenous, mauling void, screaming white  pinholes: the abyss and paradise trading places  again and again, here in a  glassy freedom  running rampant,  going about its  usual business  quite nicely  without us   in the  slow-breathing  star kingdoms and pastures of  silence.    Imagine: immaculate, immortal, opulent . . . Followed by this incredible soliloquy: silence   where there  should be legends that make us weep, grind us into dust, crush our writhing hearts in a vise . . .   Magnetic darkness  like a wordless sage too evolved for our  prim and  acceptable faith, our shark-toothed love, our trifling  mortal stories,    say something.     Tell us about the rest of it.   Read from the Book of Omnipotence    here, at time's end and time's beginning, where new, polished  thoughts are  possible,   here, in the center of raging emptiness and raucous stillness between galaxies.  Galaxies!    Is this God or another exhibition at the  palace?    Whatever this is, for a moment we are perfectly cleansed and perfectly here  and perfectly united in wonder.  Both take me to very well travelled and new places thoughts and dillemas. You have so beautifully penned these here. I hope you don't mind that I like them individually more than together, the perfection of the first has left an indelible impression on my thoughts. Best blessings Ss.  
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SSmoothie commented on: Ripened Rainbows by Cascade 4 days 23 hours ago
You had me at the first lines: And down to the very last!  Great write, I live the take and the insights! Too good!
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Stephen commented on: My Feet by williamjroneyiii 5 days 1 hour ago
Amen!!: .
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georgeschaefer commented on: TRANSPLANTED BEATNIK by georgeschaefer 5 days 9 hours ago
thank you for the kind words: thank you for the kind words
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Wordman commented on: At Last! by sweetwater 5 days 10 hours ago
  The Crossroads of dreams:   The Crossroads of dreams are always worth the meet. Congratulations on yours.  
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Wordman commented on: Musing In A Shady Wood. by sweetwater 5 days 10 hours ago
  The simplicity of what:   The simplicity of what surrounds our lives every day is a pleasure to read, when painted with words by a true artist.  Thank you for this, it's beautiful.  
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Wordman commented on: Ripened Rainbows by Cascade 5 days 10 hours ago
  I will just echo what has:   I will just echo what has been said, or meant to be said, or tried to be said, and I will do it in my own way, spoken with my limited vocabulary, with a smile, and with awe, Bravo! 
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