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Jan9thxciv commented on: Cyber punk by Teytonon 6 hours 3 min ago
Thanks for the reply.  I: Thanks for the reply.  I doubt that I have any credentials by which to make recommendations, except read whatever is interesting, and if it beecomes passionate than read even more, and let all of that seep into your poetry.
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Teytonon commented on: Cyber punk by Teytonon 6 hours 6 min ago
Reply to you: Hi. It's nice to meet you. I must admit my knowledge of those novels is pathetic. Same goes for 90% of the world of poetry. Always been interested in wordplay,puns,etc. Any recommendations for a neophyte like me? thanks
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Ground commented on: The Portals Of Silence by saiom2 6 hours 7 min ago
Like: I read a story by Ram Dass today about a silent retreat he had been on. This poem reminded me of his story. Silent retreat. Sounds like an intense exploration. 
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eleven_eleven commented on: Like Mother, Like Daughter by eleven_eleven 7 hours 21 min ago
True. Squabbling is pretty: True. Squabbling is pretty standard, verbal abuse is a different level. 
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allets commented on: Society by socialoutcast1134 7 hours 54 min ago
Start A Tribe: If you build it they will come. :D
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allets commented on: Choices by socialoutcast1134 7 hours 55 min ago
Trapped: True.
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allets commented on: Like Mother, Like Daughter by eleven_eleven 7 hours 58 min ago
Squabbling: A part of the patchwork quilt of marriage. The kids know the pitfalls and avoid it and grow or emulate it and become cyclic. Learn or lose. - slc
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allets commented on: Flocking to Familiarity by eleven_eleven 8 hours 1 min ago
Comfortability: Great word! She longs to have choice and follow-through and freedom, she does. - slc
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Jan9thxciv commented on: Footnote: Making Love As A Lesson In Astrophysics by Jan9thxciv 9 hours 2 min ago
Thank you so much.: Thank you so much.
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eleven_eleven commented on: Footnote: Making Love As A Lesson In Astrophysics by Jan9thxciv 9 hours 16 min ago
interesing. Nice write : interesing. Nice write 
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allets commented on: Where No Poet Has Gone Ever by allets 10 hours 2 min ago
Awwwww Shucks!: Thanks for stoppin' by to find something you like here, LUTB. I am humbled and you are well come. Your comment settles to the best places in my heart and glows there being deeply felt - Just Bein' - slc  
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Jan9thxciv commented on: Footnote: Making Love As A Lesson In Astrophysics by Jan9thxciv 10 hours 12 min ago
Thank you so kindly.: Thank you so kindly.
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allets commented on: Footnote: Making Love As A Lesson In Astrophysics by Jan9thxciv 10 hours 27 min ago
Nice Comparison: The interactions of matter :) slc
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Jan9thxciv commented on: Hello by Teytonon 10 hours 50 min ago
Impressive allusion to Old: Impressive allusion to Old Possum at the beginning of your poem.  I spent two of my four years at college studying his stuff intensely.  While I do not think he was the literary dictator that his most devoted followers thought (and to which I agreed prior to 1979), I was glad to see his star fall a bit, and his prose criticism pretty much discreditedby now.  Eliot's great work was his poem, concluding with the Quartets.  The rest of it was like Pound's Cantos---a colossal failure.
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Jan9thxciv commented on: Stop then shop by Teytonon 10 hours 54 min ago
Quite a lyric rant about: Quite a lyric rant about shopping these days, for lunch or groceries, or whatever.  You have taken a very frustrating experience, which I believe to be fairly universal, and given it a lighthearted turn.
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