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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: a widow’s lament by redbrick 1 week 2 days ago
I cannot stop re-reading this: I cannot stop re-reading this poem!
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: a widow’s lament by redbrick 1 week 2 days ago
I have written a few poems: I have written a few poems about the Romanovs' martyrdom, but none of my stuff rises to the level that this poem achieves.  You are Il Miglior Fabbro!!!  I feel very blessed and privileged to be able to say this to you openly.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Late On The Night Of January 21st, 1924 by S74rw4rd-13d 1 week 2 days ago
That is so very true!: That is so very true!
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redbrick commented on: Late On The Night Of January 21st, 1924 by S74rw4rd-13d 1 week 2 days ago
Indeed, it is a painful thing: Indeed, it is a painful thing to meditate on and process. 
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Late On The Night Of January 21st, 1924 by S74rw4rd-13d 1 week 2 days ago
That line, "But I cannot: That line, "But I cannot forget the other ground, where no flowers bloom, no bells resound. The Romanov children, stripped and slain, their bodies hidden in Siberian rain" has the power of a "suckerpunch" to the gut or kidney.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Late On The Night Of January 21st, 1924 by S74rw4rd-13d 1 week 3 days ago
This should be posted as a: This should be posted as a poem, as it is far better than my poem!
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redbrick commented on: Late On The Night Of January 21st, 1924 by S74rw4rd-13d 1 week 3 days ago
Wow! And on a corollary: Wow! And on a corollary thought;  A Widow’s Lament in the Age of No Flowers Late on the night of January’s frost, I watched my husband breathe his final cost. They brought him wreathes, they brought him song, they crowned his silence, they called it strong. But I cannot forget the other ground, where no flowers bloom, no bells resound. The Romanov children, stripped and slain, their bodies hidden in Siberian rain. Graveless, cancelled, erased from the page, yet their shadows rise to indict the age. No cenotaph, no marble stone, only whispers where they lie unknown. And I, the widow, dare not tell my comrades of this thought of hell: What if the Faith they sought to kill still tolls its bell, relentless, shrill? For one is celebrated, banners unfurled, while the others are banished from the world. Yet stars above, with hostile light, judge both alike in endless night.  
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redbrick commented on: hearth of language by redbrick 1 week 3 days ago
Thanks so much. Still aiming: Thanks so much. Still aiming at getting an entire poem to soar. I understand that's quite the holy grail. When I think of that it may for some be like Frost's "nothing gold can stay."
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redbrick commented on: Poem true. Names changed? Check Webb by Teytonon 1 week 3 days ago
Sounds like the web of: Sounds like the web of Dragnet. Another Jack was a medical examiner, Klugman from Quincy, M.E. 
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redbrick commented on: cerulean chasm by redbrick 1 week 3 days ago
I've seen that a long time: I've seen that a long time ago, might have to rewatch it
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Teytonon commented on: cerulean chasm by redbrick 2 weeks 1 day ago
You certainly have the skills..: You certainly have the skills to produce a great poem That's something I've always felt Not like the producer Max Bialystock, you know him ?  He wears a cardboard belt! Thanks for posting  
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: hearth of language by redbrick 2 weeks 1 day ago
The poem is beautiful, but: The poem is beautiful, but the final two lines soar beyond the usual powers of language.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Wildflower by Seeker 2 weeks 1 day ago
Beautiful!: Beautiful!
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dis_konnected commented on: leaks by dis_konnected 2 weeks 3 days ago
Thanks: Thanks
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J-C4113d commented on: loveless by Jesster 2 weeks 5 days ago
That is sooooo true.: That is sooooo true.
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