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1SP commented on: \|\| मातृभूमि ( माँ ) तुझे प्रणाम \|\| by Balmishra 2 weeks 3 days* ago* See nature as a blessing: It's encouraging for me to see nature as a blessing. The rising sun applying a tilak. The moon showering its radiant light. River singing. Birds chirping their melodies. Nature itself becomes a priest performing rituals for the Motherland. [ go to comment ]
1SP commented on: \|\| दंश ले जो तू मुझे, तो नींद आ जाए \|\| by Balmishra 2 weeks 3 days* ago* I value your spiritual undertone.: I value the Spiritual Undertone this piece exhibits. Love flows from the body to the soul. It becomes a cleansing river, a rihjhar — a sacred stream. [ go to comment ]
1SP commented on: 'हां तुम !' by Balmishra 2 weeks 3 days* ago* I embrace your romantic metaphors.: I embrace the Romantic Metaphors you use. Lips as a wine tavern (Lab tere madhushala): Suggests intoxication and sweetness. Fairy of dreams and nectar cup (Swapn ki pari, amrit pyala): Idealizes the beloved as perfection and divine beauty. Snake and Sandalwood (Chandan se lipte bhujang): A metaphor often used in Hindi poetry to depict inseparable, intense, and passionate embrace. [ go to comment ]
Jesster commented on: Good Girl by Jesster 2 weeks 3 days* ago* Some wounds reopen an bleed out: Healing seems a constant [ go to comment ]
Teytonon commented on: Good Girl by Jesster 2 weeks 4 days* ago* One definition of..: One definition of obedient = O bed I ent er.. Some scars take a lifetime to heal. Some never do. Hope you are well. [ go to comment ]
Teytonon commented on: The story of Val by Teytonon 2 weeks 4 days* ago* Hi. Thanks for..: Hi. Thanks for responding. Yes, that's the reason, to the eye may not look pleasin' Though it's grammatically incorrect A correction don't expect Nice to hear from you. Take care. [ go to comment ]
S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Canvas by vatchejames 2 weeks 4 days* ago* This is excellent, but that: This is excellent, but that final stanza soars to the skies in a triumph of real poetic language. [ go to comment ]
S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Maestro by vatchejames 2 weeks 4 days* ago* This is a brilliant use of: This is a brilliant use of language and metaphor!!!!! [ go to comment ]
S74rw4rd-13d commented on: DAILY GRATITUDE BOOKS by joy 2 weeks 4 days* ago* Also excellent!!!: Also excellent!!! [ go to comment ]
S74rw4rd-13d commented on: TO ALL THE BOOK BANNERS OUT THERE by joy 2 weeks 4 days* ago* Excellent and timely!: Excellent and timely! [ go to comment ]
S74rw4rd-13d commented on: The story of Val by Teytonon 2 weeks 4 days* ago* Not sure of its: Not sure of its function---just to make the rhyme? [ go to comment ]
Teytonon commented on: The story of Val by Teytonon 2 weeks 5 days* ago* Regarding your comment..: Regarding your comment, about it what? [ go to comment ]
S74rw4rd-13d commented on: The story of Val by Teytonon 2 weeks 5 days* ago* In the first stanza, "she: In the first stanza, "she shoot he?"!!!!!! [ go to comment ]
Teytonon commented on: The story of Val by Teytonon 3 weeks 1 hour* ago* Thank you for your comment!..: Thank you for your comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it. [ go to comment ]
ramonathompsont commented on: The story of Val by Teytonon 3 weeks 6 hours* ago* lol cute. I liked this one: lol cute. I liked this one [ go to comment ]