I like that you went cosmic: I like that you went cosmic with it! There’s something in the poem’s motion that invites that kind of constellation‑mapping. For me, though, the piece was working more in the realm of tempo rather than trajectory. But I appreciate the Sagittarius drift which is interesting to see how the poem’s internal movement reads from the outside. Much enjoyed engagement
Sagittarius: An astrological acknowledgement, on the nuances of how to love properly... I pictured a sort of "connecting of cosmic dots," as it were, or perhaps a pulling of constellations... What's the one with the bow and arrow? Another extension of Orion? Bleh.
Nothing of the sort…: Thank you SSmoothie; it's good to see you again... Sorry for the delayed response; this site has been acting slow for me; and, mostly out of dull curiosity, I pose the following question: Is this site acting slowly for you, as well? Thanks in advance (lol)
I absolutely relished your: I absolutely relished your razor-sharp skewering of that gleefully heartless entity: corporate media.
"oh, the press gets butterflies
their pens sing
'pat and rub my tummy, too'"
Thank you! Someone had to say it.
And you said it so well.
I would have replied to your: I would have replied to your startlingly eloquent and deeply moving comment sooner, but I've been having difficulty logging in. Thank you, fine poet, for your support and understanding of my vision. It means more than you know.