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redbrick commented on: permission by redbrick 3 weeks 3 days ago
I like that you went cosmic: I like that you went cosmic with it! There’s something in the poem’s motion that invites that kind of constellation‑mapping. For me, though, the piece was working more in the realm of tempo rather than trajectory. But I appreciate the Sagittarius drift which is interesting to see how the poem’s internal movement reads from the outside. Much enjoyed engagement 
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Pungus commented on: permission by redbrick 3 weeks 3 days ago
Sagittarius: An astrological acknowledgement, on the nuances of how to love properly... I pictured a sort of "connecting of cosmic dots," as it were, or perhaps a pulling of constellations... What's the one with the bow and arrow? Another extension of Orion? Bleh.
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Stephen commented on: TWO DOORS by Stephen 3 weeks 3 days ago
Thank You: This was a delusion i suffered in the hospital while doped up on morphine. Or was it a delusion?
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ramonathompsont commented on: TWO DOORS by Stephen 3 weeks 3 days ago
short but powerful. could: short but powerful. could almost see the Grim Reaper stalking forward
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Pungus commented on: Tanka Time by Pungus 3 weeks 4 days ago
That's a nice way of looking: That's a nice way of looking at it; a tiddybit dorky though *wink* or needlessly assuming
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Pungus commented on: laundry smells by Pungus 3 weeks 4 days ago
Nothing of the sort…: Thank you SSmoothie; it's good to see you again... Sorry for the delayed response; this site has been acting slow for me; and, mostly out of dull curiosity, I pose the following question: Is this site acting slowly for you, as well? Thanks in advance (lol)
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redbrick commented on: THERE AT CALVARY by beaconzbard 4 weeks 2 days ago
Calvary is indeed the face of: Calvary is indeed the face of Grace, a bittersweet divine embrace.
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ramonathompsont commented on: Cutting Cords by maybethepoet 4 weeks 3 days ago
makes good song lyrics.: makes good song lyrics.
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ramonathompsont commented on: Find me in my Freedom. by starlover2103 4 weeks 3 days ago
Love this! Way to believe in: Love this! Way to believe in yourself and your inner power!
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ramonathompsont commented on: Findloveonline.com by Teytonon 4 weeks 5 days ago
good one. captured online: good one. captured online love and dating perfectly
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ramonathompsont commented on: THE STAIN by starlover2103 4 weeks 5 days ago
Reminds me of Lady Mcbeth.: Reminds me of Lady Mcbeth. Out damn spot! Out!   Very well done!
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ramonathompsont commented on: PAUSE FOR PAWS by pamschwetz 5 weeks 15 hours ago
very sweet: very sweet
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patriciajj commented on: When War Criminals Make Love by lyrycsyntyme 5 weeks 2 days ago
I absolutely relished your: I absolutely relished your razor-sharp skewering of that gleefully heartless entity: corporate media.    "oh, the press gets butterflies their pens sing 'pat and rub my tummy, too'"    Thank you! Someone had to say it.    And you said it so well. 
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patriciajj commented on: Outside the Gates of Reason by patriciajj 5 weeks 2 days ago
I would have replied to your: I would have replied to your startlingly eloquent and deeply moving comment sooner, but I've been having difficulty logging in. Thank you, fine poet, for your support and understanding of my vision. It means more than you know. 
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Stephen commented on: Guaranteed results in 10 days! by Teytonon 5 weeks 2 days ago
SOS: Same old shit.
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