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Jesster commented on: The price per gal, up or not? by Teytonon 8 weeks 12 hours ago
I'm thinking what I'm: I'm thinking what I'm thinking, you're thinking what you're thinking and we don't know if we are thinking the same or different different or same. 
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Teytonon commented on: The price per gal, up or not? by Teytonon 8 weeks 12 hours ago
Regarding your comment..: Regarding your comment, if you're thinking what I think you're thinking, you should be ashamed of yourself!  
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Jesster commented on: The price per gal, up or not? by Teytonon 8 weeks 13 hours ago
Hmmm: Hmmm
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Teytonon commented on: Last 3 - 2 out of 3 ain’t bad? by Teytonon 8 weeks 19 hours ago
lol..: lol.
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Stephen commented on: Last 3 - 2 out of 3 ain’t bad? by Teytonon 8 weeks 1 day ago
It also ain't good.: "Ain't"  --  Sounds like you are from Texas (A good thing).
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Teytonon commented on: Not the apocalypse, a lunar eclipse by Teytonon 8 weeks 1 day ago
Once again, let me express..: Once again, let me express my gratitude for such a comprehensive review of my work. Are you an English professor? You certainly could be one. Thanks again. 
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1SP commented on: What a Beautiful Thing by 1SP 8 weeks 3 days ago
The Beauty of Our Bond: Thank you! I truly appreciate the encouragement. I’ll definitely keep writing and sharing pieces that mean something to me.
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1SP commented on: What a Beautiful Thing by 1SP 8 weeks 3 days ago
Where Love Becomes Legacy: I appreciate that. Fatherhood brings out a different kind of passion—steady, protective, and full of joy. I’m glad it came through in the writing.
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1SP commented on: What a Beautiful Thing by 1SP 8 weeks 3 days ago
Appreciating the Love You Saw: Thank you so much. This one came straight from the heart—there’s nothing more real to me than the bond between a father and his son. I’m grateful the emotion reached you the way it felt when I wrote it. Cheers to you as well.
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1SP commented on: LIMP PENIS by georgeschaefer 8 weeks 3 days ago
The Power of Plainspoken Imagery: You’re welcome. It’s a bold piece, and the directness of the imagery really does sharpen the critique you’re making. I appreciated how the plainspoken approach cuts straight to the frustration you’re highlighting. Thanks again for sharing your work.
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1SP commented on: The Search For Nancy by ramonathompsont 8 weeks 3 days ago
Honoring the Urgency: You’re welcome. Pieces like this deserve to be seen for the urgency and courage they carry. Your voice gives shape to the community’s fear, anger, and hope, and I’m glad I could acknowledge the power behind it.
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1SP commented on: Glorious America! by ramonathompsont 8 weeks 3 days ago
Your Work Invites People In: You’re very welcome! It was a joy to sit with a piece that carries so much hope and intention. The acrostic structure and the encouraging voice work beautifully together, so I’m glad I could highlight what was already shining through. Keep creating—your work has a way of inviting people in.
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1SP commented on: Trump's Iran War by ramonathompsont 8 weeks 3 days ago
When a Slip Adds a Layer: No worries at all — honestly, the slip made the acrostic even more intriguing at first glance. It’s one of those happy accidents that ends up adding an extra layer before the reader realizes what’s happening. I’m glad the title’s fixed now, but the piece still carries that same tension and momentum that made it stand out in the first place. Appreciate you taking a moment to respond!
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Thank You Father Today by 1SP 8 weeks 3 days ago
Amen to that, my Brother.: Amen to that, my Brother.
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1SP commented on: Trump's Tran War by ramonathompsont 8 weeks 3 days ago
A Poem Built in Two Directions: Again one of the most striking features of this piece is its vertical message.   Reading the first letters of each line in this time the first two stanzas spells:   T R U M P S   T R A N W A R   This creates another one of double-layered pieces:   • The horizontal lines express a desire for empathy, understanding, and growth.   • The vertical spine quietly names the subject and the conflict.   This contrast between what is said and what is spelled is intentional and gives the piece its tension.
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