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1SP commented on: There Is No Wall by lyrycsyntyme 13 weeks 23 hours* ago* This reads like a soft: This reads like a soft unraveling, the kind you only notice in the quiet. The sensory details make the heartbreak feel real and close. [ go to comment ]
1SP commented on: Tiny Little Gears (Ticks of Eternity) by lyrycsyntyme 13 weeks 23 hours* ago* I like how you make time feel: I like how you make time feel human — gears turning, hearts driving the motion, love setting the pace. The imagery is warm and grounded, especially that scene beneath the stars. [ go to comment ]
1SP commented on: Where I Am by lyrycsyntyme 13 weeks 1 day* ago* The way you tie the fading: The way you tie the fading light to self‑awareness is powerful. Those quiet moments between sunset and dawn really do reveal where we stand. [ go to comment ]
1SP commented on: Aim For The Stars (And Land Two Feet Away) by lyrycsyntyme 13 weeks 1 day* ago* The repetition of aiming high: The repetition of aiming high but landing two feet away says everything. It’s a powerful portrait of someone fighting gravity they don’t want to admit is there. [ go to comment ]
1SP commented on: The Dusty Trinket by lyrycsyntyme 13 weeks 1 day* ago* The imagery is powerful —: The imagery is powerful — dust over the eyes, kicked under the dresser, the sudden shift from being wanted to being overlooked. You captured that kind of loss with real clarity. [ go to comment ]
1SP commented on: Uncontrolled Demolition by lyrycsyntyme 13 weeks 1 day* ago* This reads like the moment: This reads like the moment you realize something can’t be rebuilt, no matter how hard you chase it. The minimal lines make the emotion even sharper. [ go to comment ]
1SP commented on: Stolen Things by lyrycsyntyme 13 weeks 1 day* ago* You captured the weight of: You captured the weight of inheritance — how land, power, trauma, and blame get passed down whether we want them or not. A strong, necessary reflection. [ go to comment ]
1SP commented on: When War Criminals Make Love by lyrycsyntyme 13 weeks 1 day* ago* The satire cuts clean in this: The satire cuts clean in this one. The way you show the media swooning over power while ignoring the damage behind it is sharp and unsettling [ go to comment ]
1SP commented on: Sonnet for Jessie Trice by 1SP 13 weeks 1 day* ago* Thank you for taking the time: Thank you for taking the time to read it. Jessie Trice’s work shaped healthcare for so many families here in Miami, and her story deserves to be remembered. I’m glad the poem opened that door for you. [ go to comment ]
ramonathompsont commented on: God Bless Donald Trump by ramonathompsont 13 weeks 1 day* ago* Thank you: Thank you [ go to comment ]
1SP commented on: All about Bob, a big fat slob by Teytonon 13 weeks 1 day* ago* The way the word breaks down: The way the word breaks down line by line says a lot — it’s like watching humanity fade piece by piece. Strong visual message. [ go to comment ]
1SP commented on: What’s with Maureen? It remains to be seen by Teytonon 13 weeks 1 day* ago* This was a fun read — the: This was a fun read — the rhymes, the misunderstandings, the office chaos. You’ve got a real gift for turning everyday moments into comedy. [ go to comment ]
1SP commented on: Tough week for POTUS by Teytonon 13 weeks 1 day* ago* I like how you built the: I like how you built the whole week one letter at a time. The structure itself carries the humor — you can feel the weight of each day stacking up [ go to comment ]
1SP commented on: History repeats - Chapter 1 by Teytonon 13 weeks 1 day* ago* The way the letters fall away: The way the letters fall away line by line feels like watching awareness erode in real time. A powerful visual for how history repeats when people refuse to see. [ go to comment ]
1SP commented on: The GOAT, I’m here to boost by Teytonon 13 weeks 1 day* ago* This was a fun read — the way: This was a fun read — the way you flipped each legend’s name into a rhyme shows real creativity. It captures the spirit of the game and the joy of writing. [ go to comment ]