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allets commented on: Sky-burial by DSR.Summar 4 days 17 hours ago
"feathered" bellies - well: "feathered" bellies - well writ. Solemn and a sight repeated. . Lady A .
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DSR.Summar commented on: Onlooker by DSR.Summar 4 days 17 hours ago
hmmmm... will they live happily ever after...: Thanks for the encouragement Lady A:D
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Starward commented on: On An Old, Barely Legible Tombstone, Somewhere In Rural England by Starward 5 days 2 hours ago
Thank you very much.: Thank you very much.
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patriciajj commented on: On An Old, Barely Legible Tombstone, Somewhere In Rural England by Starward 5 days 2 hours ago
A weathered tombstone as a: A weathered tombstone as a frame. Gothic. Romantic. Brilliant! 
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patriciajj commented on: Heron Clan November 28, 2021 by djtj 5 days 2 hours ago
I appreciate the background: I appreciate the background on the first poem. It's even more sublime knowing the reference. All your poems are works of art. 
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and_hera_met_zeus commented on: Temptation in Shivering Boughs by and_hera_met_zeus 5 days 3 hours ago
I’m not surprised that: you understand this poem, since you're also a gardener and general lover of the green, blooming creatures.  <3
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and_hera_met_zeus commented on: God Loves You by and_hera_met_zeus 5 days 3 hours ago
Wow!: That's really beautiful!  
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patriciajj commented on: On the Shores of Cepheus by patriciajj 5 days 3 hours ago
Thank you for your very: Thank you for your very encouraging feedback and for reading with such insight and appreciation. 
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djtj commented on: On the Shores of Cepheus by patriciajj 5 days 12 hours ago
Day slams shut: and the splintery winds, all purity and secrets and remembering.   Don't let me off lightly, God of all this,   I want every shard of unbearable love, infinity I needed to hear that today.  every shard of unbearable love.  Tells us we live... The day slams shut with stars as your audience.   Brillant Debbie  
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djtj commented on: Heron Clan November 28, 2021 by djtj 5 days 12 hours ago
Thank you: I love your critics The yellow Wings is the english translation from an Indian dialect that means light reflected up from still waters through leaves.  I wrote the actual reference I used when I updated this post with the proper tribe it was ascribed to.  My memory fails me and my computer un-sauvey wont allow a quick glance at the post lol   Its such a distinct description. The 2 poems are as you saids studies on the same subject.  the last has a personal touch with bringing in a person to the poem.  I asked my group when I read it which they preferred.  They perferred the 2nd one.  Thank you for visiting.  Time flies.  Your insights are much appreciated. Debbie
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allets commented on: Green spyder by Seeker 5 days 15 hours ago
That: Is a poem to make a Detroiter smile.
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allets commented on: 10,000 Prostrations by DSR.Summar 5 days 15 hours ago
Life : Is ritual.
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allets commented on: Onlooker by DSR.Summar 5 days 15 hours ago
Material Here: For a short story; beautifully descriptive, the tone perfection. . Lady A
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allets commented on: Chained by DSR.Summar 5 days 15 hours ago
That's Not Madness: That's normal. I do that at pevery waking. :D . Lady A
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allets commented on: Candy Wrapper by Coffeepot 5 days 16 hours ago
That's: Some candy bar! :D Lady A  
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