I so much agree with: I so much agree with everything you have said here, smooth. I love this resounding prayer for hope and all the simple things that make life and living it beautiful. Xx
Thank you smoothness! I'm: Thank you smoothness! I'm sorry for my late reply to your wonderful review I haven't been on line much and just you had visited.
Thanks friends, I am working: Thanks friends, I am working hard as heck on this 'fish face foot' prose and so very very greatly appreciate yall stopping by with the nice condiments
I wonder if the assassins had: I wonder if the assassins had considered just how far reaching would be the effect of Caesar's murder? And, it, too, set in motion a sequence of circumstances that ultimately affected the life of Christ when He came among us.
Thank you very much. You: Thank you very much. You always understand, so very well and accurately, all of my poems on which you comment---especially the poems in this series.
Thank you for using your: Thank you for using your sharp and visionary perception to pinpoint exactly what I was going for, exactly what I was attempting to metaphorically capture. Your stunning confirmation and your far-reaching, incisive and exact interpretation felt like that moment when a hockey puck flies into a net or a bat hits the ball.
You granted me a win, and a gorgeous one at that. I am also delighted whenever you revisit your grandparents' patch of Heaven and bring it vividly into my mind's eye.
I can now call this a very good day. Boundless gratitude.
The casual charm and: The casual charm and identifiable impressions jotted down quickly and without pretense made this instantly accessible, artfully simple and immersive. I always thoroughly enjoy your authenticity and genuine talent, in fact, when I see a new post from you, I consider it a must-read.
You keep striking gold in: You keep striking gold in these succinct and meteoric snapshots. Your metaphors don't shrink from simultaneously reaching far and tunnelling deep, but what really wowed me was:
"your soul is God-breathed"
There it is: what sets this apart from simple mortal pleasure, as nice as that is . . . what makes this praiseworthy art and inwardly impacting. I don't need to explain how perfect that line is.
A fine tribute to J. Darling's style.
What a splendid gesture to: What a splendid gesture to honor them with one of your death poems. You are quite the elegist, and you certainly set a standard on PostPoems for poems of this kind.