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Teytonon commented on: Hello by Teytonon 2 days 5 hours ago
reply to you: Hello again. I don"t take flattery so well. So go to ****. We have to laugh sometimes. Hope you can. Thanks again.
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Teytonon commented on: What by Teytonon 2 days 5 hours ago
reply to you: Thank you so much for nice words. Glad you enjoyed. Hope you're employed! Sorry.
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burkej1h commented on: I by burkej1h 2 days 6 hours ago
I try to express myself as I: I try to express myself as I feel, though it may seem like a definition it is usually only a fleeting glance...
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allets commented on: Just passing through ... by sootyash 2 days 6 hours ago
I Read It 5x: The poem is haunting with pleas. The repetition makes it so. The small line lengths are almost direct address only it is very much exclusively to this non-descript "other" friend/family/lover - not in the poem, only friend in the explanation - but the entrapment is finely constructed and metaphorically solid as rusty chains and the hope that someone will break them and free the subject. Add that it is a woman's voice pleading and a whole other level opens up. Add universal ambiance and it becomes a symbol for anyone oppressed, in distress, caught inside circumstances that heighten the drama of the "rant" for help. - It is a very nice write. - slc
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allets commented on: SURVIVAL MODE by fuche_bu 2 days 7 hours ago
Messed Up!: If u don't know how you got home. Auto piloting - no, never did that during any decade. Amazing! :D slc
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allets commented on: SKELETAL REMAINS (fiverse unrhymed) by fuche_bu 2 days 7 hours ago
Awwwwww: U discovered that a little life passed there and was buried by someone who loved it or just wanted to be rid of the varmit. Bones - slc
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allets commented on: GENTLE MOONBEAMS by fuche_bu 2 days 7 hours ago
Sounds: peaceful - slc
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allets commented on: SANCTITY OF THE MEN'S ROOM by fuche_bu 2 days 7 hours ago
It Was The Delaware River Water: that made them act like that. There was a report a while back. Wild and crazy days - slc
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allets commented on: GREASY SPOON IN ATLANTA by fuche_bu 2 days 8 hours ago
Cool Story: Twice something aking to that happened to  me in restaurants. We shut down most of the Denny's here near and around Detroit. We just stopped going there. People would come in after we arrived and we would get served last. At one restaurant they walked away from me while I was trying to pay for the food. I watied five minutes for them to return. I looked at the patrons and realized I needed biker back-up in this joint. Rich white people in nowhere Michigan. A friend couple got locked into their hotel after check in so they would not walk the streets. - We all have tales to tell. It is, after all, america!
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allets commented on: LETTING GO OF RIMBAUD by fuche_bu 2 days 8 hours ago
Hey fuche_bu: "...I move further  and further away from the past... I really like this way of using a calendar - nice line! slc  
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allets commented on: RAINBOW by fuche_bu 2 days 8 hours ago
Rainbows: rock. They sometimes appear unexpectedly long and far reaching and mystical. Like a little "hey human" kinda greeting. - slc
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allets commented on: Hello by Teytonon 2 days 8 hours ago
Prufrock would approve I: Prufrock would approve I think. I do :D slc Cute write
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allets commented on: To be here by Teytonon 2 days 8 hours ago
Rhymes I Like: I find these hilarious - slc
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allets commented on: What by Teytonon 2 days 9 hours ago
Polit-Literature: Polilit makes my day. Thank you. So many wonder rhymes with smarty - slc
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allets commented on: MY GUILT by SWA 2 days 9 hours ago
Grandfathers: r special people. I learned boxing, baseball, and wrestling names and fames via mine. He was my grandmama's husband and we called him Unka Bud. I visit his grave withever I visit grandmama. - slc
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