Haiku and Hokku

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Haiku

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Winter breathes coldly

A rose on new-fallen snow

Beauty in nature

 

White carpet without

Inside, the dog sleeps soundly

Dreaming of Spring days

 

Rain upon the window

Soothing, sweetly singing soft

As I write about it

 

II.

 

Family stay near

Life's storms draw close together

What calm drives apart

 

Special together

As I concentrate on work

She watches TV

 

Fearing the future

She wraps her arms around me

And holds me tightly

 

III.

 

Alluring water-front

Holding magnificent crafts

Warships now at peace

 

Men of foul language

Cargo brought ashore today

The smell of the sea

 

Moonlight on the waves

Horns of vessels passing by

A lonely gull cries

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Although I am too old

Although I am too old fashioned to like *most* of the haiku written outside of the 5/7/5 pattern, I make an exception for these.  They are absolutely and undoubtedly brilliant, and I hope you will be working on some more soon, as this form seems to fit your observations and experiences.  Bravo on a great job!


Starward

 

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Thanks

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed them. I may give it another go soon.

~Seraphim


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Part III #1 & #3

Magnificent penning - enjoyed - slc


 

 

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I'm glad you enjoyed them

I'm glad you enjoyed them


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