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georgeschaefer commented on: LIMP PENIS by georgeschaefer 16 weeks 18 hours ago
Thank you for reading and: Thank you for reading and commenting
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Stephen commented on: Some er..dumber, right? by Teytonon 16 weeks 23 hours ago
You appear to be right ...: .... until you consider the alternatives  --  Biden, Harris or (God forbid) Newsom.  (Before casting stones, you may want to looks ta the decision you guys made in the mayorial race in New York City!!
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1SP commented on: The Search For Nancy by ramonathompsont 16 weeks 1 day ago
A Plea for Justice: This is a masterclass in confrontation It brilliantly shifts from a community call to action ("This must stay upfront in the public eye") to a direct, aggressive challenge to an antagonist ("A monster is out there," "Forget about your greed"). #JusticeForNancy  #SayHerName
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1SP commented on: Everything I Got by 1SP 16 weeks 1 day ago
Building on your song idea: I’m so glad it resonated with you. If this is a song, you are definitely the melody I was trying to find. I couldn’t have written it without you being the inspiration.
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ramonathompsont commented on: Everything I Got by 1SP 16 weeks 2 days ago
this would make an awesome: this would make an awesome song!
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1SP commented on: LIMP PENIS by georgeschaefer 16 weeks 2 days ago
The shock value brings value: The Shock Value this work provides for me delivers both value and shock separately but at the same time.    This piece doesn't hide behind abstractions.   The shock of the central metaphor drives me to confront the same frustration of unentertaining pep rallies for myself. It is a blunt illustration for everyone. 
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1SP commented on: || मातृभूमि ( माँ ) तुझे प्रणाम || by Balmishra 16 weeks 2 days ago
See nature as a blessing: It's encouraging for me to see nature as a blessing. The rising sun applying a tilak. The moon showering its radiant light. River singing. Birds chirping their melodies. Nature itself becomes a priest performing rituals for the Motherland.
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1SP commented on: || दंश ले जो तू मुझे, तो नींद आ जाए || by Balmishra 16 weeks 2 days ago
I value your spiritual undertone.: I value the Spiritual Undertone this piece exhibits. Love flows from the body to the soul.      It becomes a cleansing river, a rihjhar — a sacred stream. 
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1SP commented on: 'हां तुम !' by Balmishra 16 weeks 2 days ago
I embrace your romantic metaphors.: I embrace the Romantic Metaphors you use. Lips as a wine tavern (Lab tere madhushala): Suggests intoxication and sweetness. Fairy of dreams and nectar cup (Swapn ki pari, amrit pyala): Idealizes the beloved as perfection and divine beauty. Snake and Sandalwood (Chandan se lipte bhujang): A metaphor often used in Hindi poetry to depict inseparable, intense, and passionate embrace.
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Jesster commented on: Good Girl by Jesster 16 weeks 2 days ago
Some wounds reopen an bleed out: Healing seems a constant 
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Teytonon commented on: Good Girl by Jesster 16 weeks 3 days ago
One definition of..: One definition of obedient = O bed I ent er.. Some scars take a lifetime to heal. Some never do. Hope you are well.
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Teytonon commented on: The story of Val by Teytonon 16 weeks 3 days ago
Hi. Thanks for..: Hi. Thanks for responding. Yes, that's the reason, to the eye may not look pleasin' Though it's grammatically incorrect  A correction don't expect  Nice to hear from you. Take care.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Canvas by vatchejames 16 weeks 3 days ago
This is excellent, but that: This is excellent, but that final stanza soars to the skies in a triumph of real poetic language.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Maestro by vatchejames 16 weeks 3 days ago
This is a brilliant use of: This is a brilliant use of language and metaphor!!!!!
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: DAILY GRATITUDE BOOKS by joy 16 weeks 3 days ago
Also excellent!!!: Also excellent!!!
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