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ramonathompsont commented on: ANCESTORS by joy 14 weeks 1 day ago
yes. true blessings: yes. true blessings
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ramonathompsont commented on: DAILY GRATITUDE TIME AND PARENTING by joy 14 weeks 1 day ago
simply wonderful: simply wonderful
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wisdomscry commented on: Emptiness by wisdomscry 14 weeks 1 day ago
   Thank you:    Thank you
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Standing Prayer For The Remainder Of The InnKeeper's---That Man's---Administration by S74rw4rd-13d 14 weeks 1 day ago
Nice, but perhaps: Nice, but perhaps unrealistic.  I believe he is the American version of Joe Stalin.
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Jesster commented on: Standing Prayer For The Remainder Of The InnKeeper's---That Man's---Administration by S74rw4rd-13d 14 weeks 1 day ago
not a chance: maybe, in a universe of pure potentiality,  he will have a spontaneous breakthrough and suddenly grow a conscience and a heart. Wouldn't that be a nice script flip?
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Jesster commented on: barefooted at the gate by redbrick 14 weeks 4 days ago
I too : I too love this poem. In fact, I have enjoyed each of your works that I've read so far. 
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: barefooted at the gate by redbrick 14 weeks 4 days ago
I love this poem, especially: I love this poem, especially its title.
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redbrick commented on: the tan gent by redbrick 14 weeks 4 days ago
Nowhere near your mastery: Nowhere near your mastery level. But still fun! This one was somehow partially inspired by the golden "an" in a tan van 
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Teytonon commented on: the tan gent by redbrick 14 weeks 4 days ago
About the tan gent..: About the tan gent I have breaking news I never accused him of drug abuse  Psychotherapy he might need Never said he smoked weed All I said to the tan gent was 'Hi, pot in use?'  Enjoyed this a lot. Clever wordplay indeed!
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redbrick commented on: letters by redbrick 14 weeks 4 days ago
Thank you so much. Your: Thank you so much. Your comment helps the trajectory of future writes. 
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Jesster commented on: Free Stress by Jesster 14 weeks 5 days ago
I won't die yet: it's too soon for me you'd probably agree I'm not afraid of death if living can't be free
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Teytonon commented on: Free Stress by Jesster 14 weeks 6 days ago
Very true. A lot of truth..: Very true. A lot of truth in a few lines. Well done. Your life may be a total mess, you're about to freak You're looking for an answer, a stress-free life you seek It's easy; food, water, shelter, clothes, are the things I speak  Ignore the necessities of life? You'll die within a week*   *Maybe not a week, but your odds aren't good.
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Jesster commented on: Gut Punch by Jesster 14 weeks 6 days ago
ugh: that pit in my stomach is a physical memory
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ramonathompsont commented on: Total Eclipse of The Full Moon Heart by ramonathompsont 14 weeks 6 days ago
oops typo there. thanks for: oops typo there. thanks for letting me know.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Gut Punch by Jesster 14 weeks 6 days ago
There is so much emotive: There is so much emotive truth and wisdom in this poem, from the title right down to the poem's last word.
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