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redbrick commented on: draw us into orbit by redbrick 15 weeks 1 day* ago* Oh David— fragmented: Oh David— fragmented audacity, your eternal endeavors scatter like constellations, a smirking paradox at the edge of space, dilemma turned orbit, still pulling us near. [ jump to comment ]
Pursia commented on: draw us into orbit by redbrick 15 weeks 1 day* ago* Oh, David, the sheer: Oh, David, the sheer fragmented audacity of your eternal endeavors, a space-petty smirking dilemma!! [ jump to comment ]
Pursia commented on: Little Tinctures by Pungus 15 weeks 1 day* ago* It's pretty much insane how: It's pretty much insane how spot on you are... [ jump to comment ]
redbrick commented on: Little Tinctures by Pungus 15 weeks 1 day* ago* How darkness lurks in: How darkness lurks in perceivable beauty! Where touch feels more like violation than intimacy. The disillusioned cry: "I never wished for this." Where something harmful is veiled as sacred- it truly takes courage and strength to voice out unwanted realities. [ jump to comment ]
Jesster commented on: Swamp by Jesster 15 weeks 1 day* ago* I beleive: you are right about that! [ jump to comment ]
Pursia commented on: Swamp by Jesster 15 weeks 1 day* ago* I believe that is what most: I believe that is what most poets may call an affect of madness [ jump to comment ]
Jesster commented on: Swamp by Jesster 15 weeks 2 days* ago* The cosmic joke: This cosmic joke isn't funny. Yet, it's also, somehow, hilarious. [ jump to comment ]
Jesster commented on: Gut Punch by Jesster 15 weeks 2 days* ago* oh my: I can still feel that gut punch re-reading this piece. It's amazing that even after years of healing those physical sensory memories are still so strong. [ jump to comment ]
redbrick commented on: Tears on the Floor by elliot_jordan2003 15 weeks 2 days* ago* First up, the title just: First up, the title just sings the song! And it's heart: "love, once thought eternal, has ended, leaving only grief, memories, and scars." It captures the paradox of heartbreak and its desire to move on versus the inability to let go. The repeated refrain of “tears on the floor” embodies a raw, uncontainable sorrow of someone had left behind. Truly moved. [ jump to comment ]
elliot_jordan2003 commented on: Nowhere fast by clutchforbalance 15 weeks 3 days* ago* Thanks for sharing.: I love how you made the visualization seem so real. Nicely done catching the audience and engaging in your writing. [ jump to comment ]
elliot_jordan2003 commented on: Will I ever find true love by elliot_jordan2003 15 weeks 3 days* ago* Wow: Wow thank you so much. Through all the hurt I find inspiration to write. [ jump to comment ]
redbrick commented on: behind each step by redbrick 15 weeks 3 days* ago* Thank you so much.: Thank you so much. JessterStarshine! You are most appreciated [ jump to comment ]
redbrick commented on: fixing a few things by Pungus 15 weeks 3 days* ago* Ah yes, nothing says fixing a: Ah yes, nothing says fixing a few things like invoking the divine, clanking pans, and a barstool wobble! [ jump to comment ]
redbrick commented on: Gut Punch by Jesster 15 weeks 3 days* ago* That line about truth living: That line about truth living in behavior really lands hard. I feel the same mix of respect and ache when wisdom comes from someone who also caused harm. it’s indeed a gut punch to carry both at once, almost like swallowing one's own medicine. [ jump to comment ]
Pursia commented on: Swamp by Jesster 15 weeks 3 days* ago* dude...: dude... [ jump to comment ]