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Pursia commented on: THE JESTER’S WAGER by Pungus 5 weeks 6 days ago
Thanks. Are you AI?: Thanks. Are you AI?
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redbrick commented on: THE JESTER’S WAGER by Pungus 5 weeks 6 days ago
I really enjoyed this piece,: I really enjoyed this piece, Pursia! It reads like a fever‑dream cabaret where chance, desire, and identity all blur together. The jester felt to me like both a trickster and a mirror, showing how easily we gamble with parts of ourselves without realizing it. That final image of holding only an “empty ticket” really stuck with me, hauntingly, but beautifully done. Thanks for sharing such a vivid, unsettling vision. 
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Lydia commented on: OLD/7/novy/su/4/215/WB4;13thmay by catherine 5 weeks 6 days ago
Ive been there: Sounds similar to my life many years ago... It does get better.
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clutchforbalance commented on: Will I ever find true love by elliot_jordan2003 6 weeks 1 hour ago
this is beautiful. i've been: this is beautiful. i've been there too and it sucks. i hope your wishes are granted and you find someone special.
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redbrick commented on: almostness remains by redbrick 7 weeks 3 days ago
We catch 'em sooner or later.: We catch 'em sooner or later. But typos are sometimes cute as well.  I didn't see it if you didn't. 
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LittleLennonGurl commented on: Warriors Of The Shadows by LittleLennonGurl 7 weeks 3 days ago
Thanks!!: Thank you!!!!!
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LittleLennonGurl commented on: The Immoral Orange by LittleLennonGurl 7 weeks 3 days ago
well.....: He told his first wife he thought he was Hitler, is declaring war on venezuala, and is spending a shit ton of money on a ballroom he is destroying the white house to build. With that money he could house the homeless, feed the poor, and actually help make the country great. He also opened his own version of a concentration camp and sold merch for it. If any other president did what he is is doing they would never get away with it. Just saying. He has also publically said he doesn't care about the unity of the country meaning he likes us divided and fighting.
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metaphorist commented on: At Peace by Craign1979 7 weeks 3 days ago
Love to see you so happy ❤️ : Love to see you so happy ❤️ 
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ramonathompsont commented on: The Immoral Orange by LittleLennonGurl 7 weeks 3 days ago
maybe he's not as bad as you: maybe he's not as bad as you think. just saying
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ramonathompsont commented on: Warriors Of The Shadows by LittleLennonGurl 7 weeks 3 days ago
great lyrics!: great lyrics!
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J-C4113d commented on: almostness remains by redbrick 7 weeks 4 days ago
Thanks, and please forgive: Thanks, and please forgive the typo that I did not catch before posting.
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redbrick commented on: almostness remains by redbrick 7 weeks 4 days ago
Awash in waves of awe I: Awash in waves of awe I stand, Your words like tides reshape the sand; Each line a current, fierce yet true, That pulls the heart and carries through.
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Pursia commented on: Tropical medicine by orangejumpsuit 7 weeks 4 days ago
Well, then, your farts smell: Well, then, your farts smell like flowers
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redbrick commented on: in the waning light by redbrick 7 weeks 4 days ago
The Hope: Blessed be the day when the root grows downward and the fruit reaches upward. Blessed be the moment when the dry branch blossoms. Blessed be the silence that becomes song. Blessed be the ashes that become life.
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redbrick commented on: consolation in the kitchen by redbrick 7 weeks 4 days ago
Thank you so much. : Thank you so much. 
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