OFCOURSE I NOTICED IT WORKS BOTH WAYS WHEN I WROTE IT. I RARELY REWRITE MY POEMS. I LIKE TO LEAVE THEM AS THEY COME TO ME. AS YOU SAY IT WORKS BOTH WAYS AND THAT IS THE WAY I CHOSE TO LEAVE IT. THERE ARE A FEW INTERESTING COLLABS I DID WITH A COUPLE OF FRIENDS THAT ARE ABSTRACT POEMS THAT REALLY WORK BOTH WAYS IN AN INTERESTING WAY. YOU CAN READ THEM FROM THE FIRST LINE TO THE LAST OR FROM THE LAST LINE TO THE FIRST AND THEY ALL WORK BOTH WAYS...INTERESTING PHENOMENON. THEY ARE CALLED COSMIC ELECTRIC COLLECTIVE UNCONSCIOUS, STRAIGHT FROM THE HORSES MOUTH AND IF YOU DON'T BELIEVE ME. I BELIEVE THEY ARE ALL ON THE SECOND TO THE LAST PAGE OF MY POEMS...I JUST LOOKED FOR THEM PRETTY RECENTLY TO SHARE AGAIN AND WHEN I DID I PUT THE LINKS FOR THE OTHER TWO POEMS IN THE COMMENTS SO IF YOU FIND ONE YOU WILL HAVE FOUND ALL THREE WITH THE LINKS FOR ALL OF THEM. I AM SHARING THE LINKS FOR ALL THREE IN THE ORDER THEY WERE WRITTEN IN HERE...
I SEARCHED FOR THEM HERE IS THE LINK TO THE FIRST ONE THAT HAS THE LINKS TO THE OTHER TWO ON THE COMMENTS OF IT... COSMIC ELECTRIC COLLECTIVE UNCONSCIOUS THE NEXT IN ORDER IS STRAIGHT FROM THE HORSES MOUTH AND THEN THE LAST OF THE THREE IS AND IF YOU DON'T BELIEVE ME...ENJOY
What a short fun ditty
You may have played around with the postion of Combination and compliation. Would it also sound great
IRISH STEW AND MOUNTAIN DEW
WHAT A COMPLIATION
LIKE THE RHYME BUT NOT INCLINED
TO TASTE THAT COMBINATION.
Thanks for the cheery poem and somehow that kind sounds ok together though a beer would be more in line. Hope you dont mind my fooling with your poem.
Debbie J
WORKS BOTH WAYS
OFCOURSE I NOTICED IT WORKS BOTH WAYS WHEN I WROTE IT. I RARELY REWRITE MY POEMS. I LIKE TO LEAVE THEM AS THEY COME TO ME. AS YOU SAY IT WORKS BOTH WAYS AND THAT IS THE WAY I CHOSE TO LEAVE IT. THERE ARE A FEW INTERESTING COLLABS I DID WITH A COUPLE OF FRIENDS THAT ARE ABSTRACT POEMS THAT REALLY WORK BOTH WAYS IN AN INTERESTING WAY. YOU CAN READ THEM FROM THE FIRST LINE TO THE LAST OR FROM THE LAST LINE TO THE FIRST AND THEY ALL WORK BOTH WAYS...INTERESTING PHENOMENON. THEY ARE CALLED COSMIC ELECTRIC COLLECTIVE UNCONSCIOUS, STRAIGHT FROM THE HORSES MOUTH AND IF YOU DON'T BELIEVE ME. I BELIEVE THEY ARE ALL ON THE SECOND TO THE LAST PAGE OF MY POEMS...I JUST LOOKED FOR THEM PRETTY RECENTLY TO SHARE AGAIN AND WHEN I DID I PUT THE LINKS FOR THE OTHER TWO POEMS IN THE COMMENTS SO IF YOU FIND ONE YOU WILL HAVE FOUND ALL THREE WITH THE LINKS FOR ALL OF THEM. I AM SHARING THE LINKS FOR ALL THREE IN THE ORDER THEY WERE WRITTEN IN HERE...
I SEARCHED FOR THEM HERE IS THE LINK TO THE FIRST ONE THAT HAS THE LINKS TO THE OTHER TWO ON THE COMMENTS OF IT... COSMIC ELECTRIC COLLECTIVE UNCONSCIOUS THE NEXT IN ORDER IS STRAIGHT FROM THE HORSES MOUTH AND THEN THE LAST OF THE THREE IS AND IF YOU DON'T BELIEVE ME...ENJOY
https://postpoems.org/authors/pamschwetz/poem/690684
https://postpoems.org/authors/pamschwetz/poem/690640
https://postpoems.org/authors/pamschwetz/poem/690654