IRISH STEW AND MOUNTAIN DEW

 IRISH STEW AND MOUNTAIN DEW

WHAT A COMBINATION

I LIKE THE RHYME BUT NOT INCLINED

TO TASTE THAT COMPILATION  

Author's Notes/Comments: 

IRISH STEW AND MOUNTAIN DEW POPPED INTO MY HEAD SO I HAD TO DO SOMETHING WITH IT...

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djtj's picture

What a short fun ditty

You may have played around with the postion of Combination and compliation. Would it also sound great

IRISH STEW AND MOUNTAIN DEW

WHAT A COMPLIATION

LIKE THE RHYME BUT NOT INCLINED

TO TASTE THAT COMBINATION.

Thanks for the cheery poem and somehow that kind sounds ok together though a beer would be more in line. Hope you dont mind my fooling with your poem.

Debbie J 

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WORKS BOTH WAYS

OFCOURSE I NOTICED IT WORKS BOTH WAYS WHEN I WROTE IT. I RARELY REWRITE MY POEMS. I LIKE TO LEAVE THEM AS THEY COME TO ME. AS YOU SAY IT WORKS BOTH WAYS AND THAT IS THE WAY I CHOSE TO LEAVE  IT. THERE ARE A FEW INTERESTING COLLABS I DID WITH A COUPLE OF FRIENDS THAT ARE ABSTRACT POEMS THAT REALLY WORK BOTH WAYS IN AN INTERESTING WAY. YOU CAN READ THEM FROM THE FIRST LINE TO THE LAST OR  FROM THE LAST LINE TO THE FIRST AND  THEY ALL WORK BOTH WAYS...INTERESTING PHENOMENON. THEY ARE CALLED COSMIC ELECTRIC COLLECTIVE UNCONSCIOUS, STRAIGHT FROM THE HORSES MOUTH AND  IF YOU DON'T BELIEVE ME. I BELIEVE THEY ARE ALL ON THE SECOND TO THE LAST PAGE OF MY POEMS...I JUST LOOKED FOR THEM PRETTY RECENTLY TO SHARE AGAIN AND WHEN I DID I PUT THE LINKS FOR THE OTHER TWO POEMS IN THE  COMMENTS SO IF YOU FIND ONE YOU WILL HAVE FOUND ALL THREE WITH THE LINKS FOR ALL OF THEM.     I AM SHARING THE LINKS FOR ALL THREE IN THE ORDER THEY WERE WRITTEN IN HERE...

I SEARCHED FOR THEM HERE IS THE LINK TO THE FIRST ONE THAT  HAS THE LINKS TO THE OTHER TWO ON THE COMMENTS OF IT... COSMIC ELECTRIC COLLECTIVE UNCONSCIOUS THE NEXT IN ORDER IS  STRAIGHT FROM THE HORSES MOUTH AND THEN THE LAST OF THE THREE IS AND IF YOU DON'T BELIEVE ME...ENJOY

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