There he goes again
Ruthless pursuit of showing off his might and power?
United States, what do you think?
Maybe this time he's gone just a little bit too far?
Prepared no one ahead for this
Should we all be fearing what the next step could be?
Insanity run amok?
Reckless aggression?
A man mad in our own backyard?
No real answers yet but the fear does indeed linger
Where do we go from here?
Anyone's guess!
Ready for anything
Anything at all
I'm thinking
In these dark days
We're gonna have to be....
2026 Ramona Thompson Felton
TRUMP'S TRAN WAR Vs. TRUMP'S IRAN WAR
I'm not sure if you were aiming to see I noticed that's titled TRUMP'S TRAN WAR, which is clever. I almost thought that there was a war commencing in Vietnam too.
Clear emotional through‑line. The poem captures a sense of anxiety and uncertainty, and the repeated questions reinforce that unsettled mood.
Effective use of acrostic structure. The vertical spelling of TRUMP'S IRAN WAR gives the piece a hidden framework that adds interest once noticed.
The title’s wordplay is pure brilliance, and the acrostic structure becomes even more striking once noticed. At first glance, it almost suggests a conflict in another part of the world, which adds an unexpected layer of tension.
The poem maintains a clear emotional thread, moving steadily through feelings of uncertainty and unease. The repeated questions heighten that atmosphere, giving the reader the sense of someone trying to make sense of events as they unfold.
The short, clipped lines create momentum and mirror the anxious tone. That pacing works well with the poem’s theme, making the reader feel the same breathless anticipation the speaker expresses.
Thanks so much for your
Thanks so much for your insightful comments!
Big oops on the title which I have now corrected. Somehow that typo slipped past me