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allets commented on: Timeless Promises by deepblue 5 years 9 weeks ago
Title - Stone Walls: excellent rant, keep off parade rain--all stones thrown, love is impenatrable. A lesson to embrace! Bravo write ~S~  
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deepblue commented on: Timeless Promises by deepblue 5 years 9 weeks ago
A heartfelt thank you for: A heartfelt thank you for your gracious input first off :)    Your spirited words remind me of the way I felt about love and relationships in the past, and that stuff is precious. Some days I can kinda unlock that trove but I admit living on my own for a long time tends to skew that mindset. 
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allets commented on: MONGOLIAN HU by georgeschaefer 5 years 9 weeks ago
Buy A Horse : And hit the steppes like a Cossack, be a part of the music encounter composed by ancients evolved into M-Hu. (Tee hee hee)
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saiom commented on: Thou Shalt Not Kill by saiom 5 years 9 weeks ago
yes  all wars are crimes...: yes  all wars are crimes... the innocent are killed in all wars... WW2 presents many problems for pacifists though
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Jan9thian commented on: Her Nectar Flows by AquarianMale 5 years 9 weeks ago
Excellent use of metaphor and: Excellent use of metaphor and simile.  I applaud how you maintain the sensual exertion of the poem through the words you have chosen for your comparisons.
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georgeschaefer commented on: THE BLOODINESS OF FAILURE by georgeschaefer 5 years 9 weeks ago
I have my moments of clarity: I have my moments of clarity and confusion
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georgeschaefer commented on: MORAL DECLINE by georgeschaefer 5 years 9 weeks ago
thank you but it was really a: thank you but it was really a rhetorical question.
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Morningglory commented on: Sorry I'm rambling now, I will stop. Carry on. by Jesster 5 years 9 weeks ago
Chartreuse : Have your ever heard Ken Nordine's Colors?    https://youtu.be/5IVuagl9GEY [Video:https://youtu.be/5IVuagl9GEY]  
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allets commented on: with Desire by lyrycsyntyme 5 years 9 weeks ago
Substitute: Conifers for hi-rises, tranquillity for sirens, canada geese gone, gray or sky - I get those confused. City country city, wealth search or shut it out/down. The cities are the woods, open landscapes are brick and steel surrounded, threatened by distance.    
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Smudge Removal Services by lyrycsyntyme 5 years 9 weeks ago
Yes. The dilemma of the: Yes. The dilemma of the modern ruling class, in it's quest for absolute power, is that there are many who can write his/herstory now. The dilemma of the modern historian, today's common (wo)man, is that there are, subsequently, many squeegees.
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Jan9thian commented on: SUBTLE GIFT OF THE OBLIQUE by georgeschaefer 5 years 9 weeks ago
For some reason, and I cannot: For some reason, and I cannot quite explain it, this poem put me in mind of the writings of Ambrose Bierce.  I think it was the mention of Twain and then the poignant use of those words "contempt" and "bruised feelings."  I also think this poem will comtinue to resonate in my mind.
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allets commented on: Sorry I'm rambling now, I will stop. Carry on. by Jesster 5 years 9 weeks ago
Chartreuse: Is a great pallet paint. Love the ending.  
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allets commented on: Oh, mirrors are so backward... by Jesster 5 years 9 weeks ago
Excellent Comparison: Lost in the moment instead of lving it. Well said!  
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allets commented on: Are You Ready by a_whisper_away 5 years 9 weeks ago
He's Been At Hand: Since history began. Ready implies control - do this and have bliss in eternity. I want it now, want control and power to fix the earth the controllers destroyed. At hand, the big goodbye and after, valueless void. Interesting message - to subjugate. Been there - not fun.
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allets commented on: Smudge Removal Services by lyrycsyntyme 5 years 9 weeks ago
"Fire up the squeegee": . Sounds like a thorough edit or censure. It is written, preserved or erased. History - Herstory. .
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