Brief Moments

they may have been very few
the days I thought the world
was made for only us two
sitting in the darkness
looking to the sky anew
there was nothing that
couldn't be broken through
that was something I never knew
how I felt in those brief moments
where the only dream I dreamed was you
intoxicated my mind,
made me believe this was all so true
will be resting my bones next to you
I miss the short and sweet images that i drew
right before the unforeseen hits without a clue
that instant where everything is shattered blue
time stops, I decompose, there's nothing left
slowly fade away and hold on to those ideals
the day my footprints were laid in stone
never forget who you were, what we were
where the sun gleamed onto our horizon
we were only ourselves, in infinite glory
safe for a lifetime of this extraordinary story

E.A.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

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darkpool's picture

I like it, I can see myself

I like it, I can see myself in the same way. Missing is a very human trait, but all must change

MoonCruxCollision's picture

Thank you guys for the

Thank you guys for the support, i do appreciate it :)

Bloodbutterfly's picture

Wow...

You're poem was extraordinary, it had those things that just made it even better. I felt as if your poem really speaks how you feel, which is great by the way! Keep up the good work.


You can only be as beautiful as you tell yourself you are, but you can't let beauty get to your head.

SSmoothie's picture

Effing wow!

Effing wow!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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Love. Love. Love. <333333

Love. Love. Love. <333333

allets's picture

Dead Dying or Missing

Multi-theme poem with strained syntax - interesting construct - A

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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thank you, appreciate the

thank you, appreciate the support xD