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Poetic_Eyes (not verified) commented on:
Urine Machine by Anonymous 11 years 14 weeks ago
hey: hey healing. glad i got to laugh a little. this poem is so old i had totally forgotten i ever had it. i'm merging/blending some of my older poems with a new one or couple every so often.
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healingwoman commented on: Urine Machine by Anonymous 11 years 14 weeks ago
hahaha: Totally had this experience two nights ago. 
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Poetic_Eyes (not verified) commented on:
Frigid Blue Perfection by Anonymous 11 years 14 weeks ago
thanks: thanks smoothie. hugs.
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SSmoothie commented on: Frigid Blue Perfection by Anonymous 11 years 14 weeks ago
Still. Love the power of this: Still. Love the power of this one! Very deep very strong write! Bravo hugss 
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Friendly Faces by Anonymous 11 years 14 weeks ago
thanks: thanks. this poem is at least 6 years old as is "marathon coupons." i really do have a mixture of older material and "new" pieces.
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SSmoothie commented on: Friendly Faces by Anonymous 11 years 14 weeks ago
<3 <3 <3 love it life's: <3 <3 <3 love it life's leotard... Haha! Awesome thought! Hugss 
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Turmoil by Anonymous 11 years 14 weeks ago
hugs: hugs. this is an older poem.
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SSmoothie commented on: Turmoil by Anonymous 11 years 14 weeks ago
how true! well said~ hugss: how true! well said~ hugss
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...Defeat Of The Clock by Anonymous 11 years 14 weeks ago
thanks: thanks hurt.
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...To Be An Aftertaste (abstract) by Anonymous 11 years 14 weeks ago
thanks: thanks for noticing. this an older poem. the majority, not all of my poetry that the titles start with "..." are older pieces. glad you enjoy my work. i like your's as well.
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Iced Chocolate Coffee by Anonymous 11 years 14 weeks ago
kewl.: kewl. this particuliar fairy-tale had taken me about 3 days to write and is one of my favorites. 
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Burned Racism by Anonymous 11 years 14 weeks ago
i'm modernized...: i'm modernized. i don't believe in racism, discrimination, or any of the latter. however, we can't change what occured, but we can learn from it, educate, and expand as people. i love your replies to my poems. you can always post your poems on your page, but if you don't mind put it the comment section which poem inspired you. that way when people read it, it makes more sense to them. i do the...
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Don't Wake Conner (Haiku) by Anonymous 11 years 14 weeks ago
cute: cute "haiku" reply. i'm touched.
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Bare-Naked Spirit by Anonymous 11 years 14 weeks ago
thanks: thanks. i figured while i was updating i'd let you know which ones were published and in which book. i have some other ones that were published in newspapers, but the books are the most important.
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allets commented on: Cage by Anonymous 11 years 14 weeks ago
Nice Write: Looking forward to your comments on PP poets ~~A~~
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hurtandlost commented on: ...Defeat Of The Clock by Anonymous 11 years 14 weeks ago
i know this feeling, great: i know this feeling, great write!
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mrpoofs commented on: ...To Be An Aftertaste (abstract) by Anonymous 11 years 14 weeks ago
quite the eclectic sadwich: quite the eclectic sadwich you present 
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belle97 commented on: Iced Chocolate Coffee by Anonymous 11 years 14 weeks ago
this makes me hungry... :): this makes me hungry... :)
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allets commented on: Burned Racism by Anonymous 11 years 14 weeks ago
Superior Species: Historically First Nation peoples and blacks were considered a lesser species.   Neck stretched stretched blades blades sharp sharp fire fire roasting roasting flesh flesh displayed displayed junk junk symbolic symbolic power power challenged challenged lynching lynching ideas ideas change change slowly slowly reversed reversed laws laws destroy destroy lynching lynching votes.   ~~A~~...
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allets commented on: Don't Wake Conner (Haiku) by Anonymous 11 years 14 weeks ago
baby slumbering soft finger: baby slumbering soft finger set to my lips counseling quiet.   ~~A~~ 03-03-13 6:38p
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SSmoothie commented on: Bare-Naked Spirit by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
Wow! That is profound!: Wow! That is profound! "Sacred parts of me" just wow! Hugss 
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Poetic_Eyes (not verified) commented on:
Sneezing (Haiku) by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
allets...: older poem i wrote when i had this cold that was beyond annoying me and i really couldn't stop sneezing.
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Bbbbrrrrrinngggggg by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
healing...: healing...this is an older poem and i'm glad you can relate to me. i'm still in the process of re-adding my poetry, but i did write a new one last night and added this morning...that's under my fairy-tale section (log cabin sisterhood).
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Thanks by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
thanks: thanks inkstain. i was very close with my cousin and there were alot of things i didn't say or do with him that i would've liked. however writing really helped me deal with his death and i have faith he's a guardian angel and knows how missed, loved he is.
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Freedom by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
allets...: allets...this is older poem i wrote. my works changed a lot throughout the years, but it's good to show the variety of themes, styles, and my diversity of a writer. i really appreciate your support and friendship.
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Sparks Of Chemistry by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
thanks: thanks for the feedback
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healingwoman commented on: Bbbbrrrrrinngggggg by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
&: I can totally relate to this Karyn. Is this an old one or new. I feel like I'm walking in a pair of your old shoes. 
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INKSTAIN commented on: Thanks by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
A beautiful dedication!: A beautiful dedication!
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allets commented on: Sneezing (Haiku) by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
Poet Eyes: poetic cat eyes Cheshire visibility dims then fades away.   ~~A~~      
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allets commented on: Sparks Of Chemistry by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
In That Order: I liked the chronology of the limited lines...an entire event unfolded dramatically ~~A~~
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allets commented on: Freedom by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
Anarchy: is such an ugly word, but lots of folks want to do as they wish without concern for other folks - interesting write - have not seen "etc." in a poem in a while ~~A~~
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AquarianMale commented on: Sparks Of Chemistry by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
I liked this one. It was very: I liked this one. It was very succinct, and so visually alive. The process seemed so exact that one could see the whole thing happening.
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Writing Frenzy by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
true: true. i love reading your work too. 
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Strings Of Snow Bonnets by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
thanks: thanks smoothie. i've been re-adding my poetry. this is an older piece and glad you like it. like you, i'm i'm a writer/author/poetess at heart. whether i write fiction or non-fiction, a dedication or something in "general", and all that filters in between, in the depths of my soul i'm a poetess and no one's going to change that. that's one of the things we have common and why we get along/...
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I'd Hug You Forever... by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
healing...: healing...i'm glad you like it. my poems vary in depth, style, length. sometimes it's good to have a short, concise, but "sweet" poem.
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Bone-i-lous by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
mrpoofs...: mrpoofs...that's exactly the song we "re-wrote." i have other poetry that i've written with "songs" in my head. thanks for adding the video. you're awesome.
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SSmoothie commented on: Writing Frenzy by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
Wow that's great but the food: Wow that's great but the food of the soul is a nourishment that feeds others as it feeds you! Hugss 
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SSmoothie commented on: Strings Of Snow Bonnets by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
Blink and you see 900+: Blink and you see 900+ poems!?, I got a lot of catching up to do lol! ;) good see great art where it belongs - ON SHOW! :) 
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healingwoman commented on: I'd Hug You Forever... by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
awe: cute and sweet. :)
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Enough is tough by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
Thanks for the critique, I: Thanks for the critique, I suppose I could work on the punctuation and what not, this was something I jotted down in my notebook and posted on here.
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mrpoofs commented on: Bone-i-lous by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
(No subject):   couldnt help it. *shame*
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Singing Her Soul by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
hugs: hugs smoothie. i'm glad you enjoyed this piece. your friendship is wondrous and your poetry is breathtaking.
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Friendship Peek (Haiku) by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
thanks: thanks beaves. You're so sweet and i cherish not only your friendship, but also your poetry. 
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Kiss Of Eternity by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
thanks: thanks. this is an older piece of mine. 
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Woman's Paint by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
thank you: thank you dylan. that means a lot to me, especially coming from such an amazing author like yourself.
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SSmoothie commented on: Singing Her Soul by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
Just lovely! I get real sense: Just lovely! I get real sense of being there watching! :) hugss 
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Beavis commented on: Friendship Peek (Haiku) by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
;-): Nice! (beautiful eyes always draw me in;-)
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itsthesmallthings commented on: Kiss Of Eternity by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
:D: wow!! I really like this. I love the use of Cinderella in the context of this poem, and I like the line "outstretched like his hands cupping tea leaf hands" - I really like that, haha.   However I found this line confusing: "as crystal clear skies toothlessly smiles" Should it be "smile"? Since skies is plural?   Anyway great job!!(:
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9inety commented on: Woman's Paint by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
I think: William, would be so proud that he inspired such a delicate and treasured piece. Peace Dylan
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allets commented on: Enough is tough by Anonymous 11 years 15 weeks ago
Transition Condition: without punctuation, line breaks, or clear transitions between choices of continuations, I was a bit lost, but in the lostness, found a strange cohesion - the voyage like lies like leaves and bombs are surreal and all are equal before the end arrives ~~A~~
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