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redbrick commented on: Gut Punch by Jesster 45 weeks 2 days ago
That line about truth living: That line about truth living in behavior really lands hard. I feel the same mix of respect and ache when wisdom comes from someone who also caused harm. it’s indeed a gut punch to carry both at once, almost like swallowing one's own medicine. 
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Pursia commented on: Swamp by Jesster 45 weeks 3 days ago
dude...: dude...
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Teytonon commented on: Swamp by Jesster 45 weeks 3 days ago
Swamp stamp stump Trump : Swamp stamp stump Trump
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Teytonon commented on: Swamp by Jesster 45 weeks 3 days ago
Swamp stamp stump Trump p.: Swa
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Pursia commented on: Swamp by Jesster 45 weeks 3 days ago
Wow, a powerhouse of imagery: Wow, a powerhouse of imagery in four lines and the orange man is a funny enough figure I definitely laughed at the last
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Jesster commented on: behind each step by redbrick 45 weeks 3 days ago
nice: I love how you brought me into this scene. Your writings always draw me in
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Jesster commented on: THE JESTER’S WAGER by Pungus 45 weeks 3 days ago
beautiful: I really enjoyed reading this piece. 
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redbrick commented on: The Late Diane Ladd by randyjohnson 45 weeks 5 days ago
That is sad indeed. Too many: That is sad indeed. Too many are now passed away. And I find myself looking more and more to my upcoming time.
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redbrick commented on: three blind mice by redbrick 45 weeks 5 days ago
Thanks Randy. You are much: Thanks Randy. You are much appreciated. 
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randyjohnson commented on: three blind mice by redbrick 45 weeks 6 days ago
Great poem: Great poem. Keep up the good work.
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redbrick commented on: THE JESTER’S WAGER by Pungus 45 weeks 6 days ago
A gargoyle's empathy from the: A gargoyle's empathy from the exterior façade 
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Pursia commented on: THE JESTER’S WAGER by Pungus 45 weeks 6 days ago
And wise, waning words,: And wise, waning words, collapsing worlds of inheritance, spewed upon the platter like a little chimney ghoul cries dying in this my father's fireplace...need to free these ghosts...
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redbrick commented on: THE JESTER’S WAGER by Pungus 45 weeks 6 days ago
Arthritic Intermittence. : Arthritic Intermittence. 
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Pursia commented on: THE JESTER’S WAGER by Pungus 45 weeks 6 days ago
Thanks. Are you AI?: Thanks. Are you AI?
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redbrick commented on: THE JESTER’S WAGER by Pungus 45 weeks 6 days ago
I really enjoyed this piece,: I really enjoyed this piece, Pursia! It reads like a fever‑dream cabaret where chance, desire, and identity all blur together. The jester felt to me like both a trickster and a mirror, showing how easily we gamble with parts of ourselves without realizing it. That final image of holding only an “empty ticket” really stuck with me, hauntingly, but beautifully done. Thanks for sharing such a vivid, unsettling vision. 
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