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redbrick commented on: the narrow throat by redbrick 22 weeks 4 days ago
I remember in the sixth grade: I remember in the sixth grade doing a multispread research paper about ancient kingdoms of this region, all of that was pre-Google and a lot of "footwork." It was lots fun, though. Probably a venture with the same internsity as your Shelley days.  
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Pursia commented on: The Carrot Carriage by Pungus 22 weeks 4 days ago
I added successive sentences,: I added successive sentences, by the Carrot Carriage
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Pursia commented on: How to plant garden? by Pungus 22 weeks 4 days ago
Oh boy, and I was certainly: Oh boy, and I was certainly not anticipating to open such a delectable message on this particular poem!
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redbrick commented on: The Carrot Carriage by Pungus 22 weeks 4 days ago
Now this appears to be a less: Now this appears to be a less than straightforward story and more a surreal horror vignette. A lone narrator sits on a porch under a howling moon, sensing death at the door as their thoughts unravel into strange, poetic fragments. Images of ash, fountains, and scorched land blur with muttered confessions, creating a mood of dread and madness. Beneath the gothic atmosphere, the piece reads like a meditation on mortality, futility, and the thin line between sanity and the supernatural; all with the ominous sound of “clickity clack” hinting that something is drawing ever closer.
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Pungus commented on: corridor of empires by redbrick 22 weeks 4 days ago
Literally speechless.: Literally speechless.
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Pungus commented on: Toward autocracy by orangejumpsuit 22 weeks 4 days ago
Cool.: Cool. Glad to have you back.
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redbrick commented on: How to plant garden? by Pungus 22 weeks 4 days ago
"RADIANT BANJO"  I like the: "RADIANT BANJO"  I like the puddles with oil rainbows There’s always something to Tilt your head at… How strange the clouds decided to stay! We amateur astronomers are Solving a delicious riddle ‘Do not whistle when the conductor is waving at you, you reckless dreamer… now juggle…’
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ramonathompsont commented on: LOVE by joy 22 weeks 4 days ago
All I can say is Amen: All I can say is Amen
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wisdomscry commented on: EMBRACE IT! by wisdomscry 22 weeks 4 days ago
  Leak, Galic? As long as I:   Leak, Galic? As long as I am as powerful and  potent, but without the smell. lol!
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: the narrow throat by redbrick 22 weeks 5 days ago
Decades ago, I wanted to: Decades ago, I wanted to study the Ancient History of this region.  But I now realize that the footnotes, bibliographies, and debates would have sapped my enthusiasm.  It took a long time to realize that; and poems like this one remind me of what I love most about that place and the various ages and cultures that have affected it.  Thank you, a thousand times over for writing and posting this BRILLIANT poem!!!
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: in the swelling tide by redbrick 22 weeks 5 days ago
I may have to learn a second: I may have to learn a second language for additional resources with which to praise your amazing verbal achievements!!!!
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Savvart commented on: Believe by jessie2376 22 weeks 5 days ago
A wonderful, heartfelt poem: A wonderful, heartfelt poem you have created, expressing the depth of pain, recovery and 'moving on'. Loved it...
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Teytonon commented on: A brand new world by Teytonon 22 weeks 5 days ago
Thank you so much for your compliment: Thank you so much for your compliment. It gets frustrating every day to read the paper about this man. I'm trying to express my frustration. I know I'm not alone. Thanks again for your comment.
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redbrick commented on: misunderstood butterflies by redbrick 22 weeks 6 days ago
the scrolls tilt on their: the scrolls tilt on their shelves as the ground shifts, glass trembling with the weight of heirlooms and wings; beyond the frost line, a small planet turns, its orbit tugging at the tags that rise like butterflies fleeing wrists of stone.    
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Pungus commented on: misunderstood butterflies by redbrick 22 weeks 6 days ago
Deeply tectonic, earthenware: Deeply tectonic, earthenware heirlooms, Pluto beyond empty layers of that same misunderstanding, it seems to me?
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