Dreams

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Prevailing

I’m somewhere,

In a different time

In a different place

 

I’m somewhere,

A different feeling

Lost in space

 

I’m somewhere,

Caught in the midst

Of everything I know

In all that exists

My limitations grow

 

I’m somewhere,

Exposed and valiant

Bright eyes; knowing

 

I’m somewhere,

Trembling and fierce

Hearts on shoulders; showing

 

 

 

 

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tallsquirrelgirl's picture

Beautiful

Beautiful words! the rhyme doesn't seem forced, which is a rare quality I really like when it shows up. Great write!


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truthintragedies's picture

Thanks for the kind words! :)

Thanks for the kind words! :) I've really been working on my rhyming and timing. Glad that it's showing. :D


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