'10 Candy Corn

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Candy Corn


A prominent combination of colors guide your eyes to a certain direction
There you savored your scrumptious prize out of all the stores selection

I watched you breathe as your body and your face gestured an O M G!
"An amazing sight develops as if a climax seemed near from, a candy?"

One by one you toss in your mouth as you roll your eyes in gratification
Later I learned of your true love for the taste, then came lolly amputation

No questions to why you only devour the yellow, disposing of the rest
"Have to add it must be the taste and color your mouth wants to molest"

I smiled, humored in my head, watching, as you relished in sugar elation
Biting away then licking your lips, staring me down as your next selection

And there I go, closer to you, knowing I can't compete with those confections
So, kisses I steal, punish your sultry lips, all this during your sweet obsession

What a provocative event, "beholding" a candy liable for this steaming hearty stir...
"I am the yellow, your are the white, the orange is our love, which holds us together"

© David Joel Rodriguez

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Yes, I'm a clown. Must be a hell of a candy corn...

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sanctus's picture

Some spelling errors,

Some spelling errors, "colour" for example. Still, a fine piece of work

Joel's picture

Yea I was thinking about that

Yea I was thinking about that one. I had the same thoughts on "'05 Life in the Rapids"


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"You think Einstein walked around thinking everyone was a bunch of dumb-shits?"

jimtwocrows's picture

Very cute, my girlfriend says

Very cute, my girlfriend says so! (smiling)

PseudonymTruth's picture

The poem made me have an

The poem made me have an 'Awwwww' moment, which I uttered out loud and subsequently had to explain to everyone else in the room.

Very adorable, a pleasure to read.


I will not be another flower, picked for my beauty and left to die. I will be wild, difficult to find, and impossible to forget. -Erin Van Vuren

 

hhsbowlpro300's picture

That's so thoughtful! I love

That's so thoughtful! I love it :) So appropriate for the Holiday coming up! Kudos, Mister.

heatherburns35's picture

CANDY CORN

She is having a sweet attack...nice writing....enjoyed this one....