If you love me, then you would.

 

 

I'm so sorry, but I'm not in love with you.
[I care for you, so no hard feelings, right?]

 

I just don't see myself with you.
[but I don't know, maybe?]

 

I just don't know.
[But no.]

 

 


 

I know without a doubt that I love you.
(although you have hurt me bad)

 

I will continue to love you.
(yes, no matter what)

 

And if you truly loved me.
(then you would)

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Meriem_Rebelle's picture

I really love your poem. Just

I really love your poem. Just write from your heart and don't worry too much about what others will think of your poetry. as long as it comes from the heart, it defenitely is beautiful :)


Painting is silent poetry, and poetry is painting that speaks.
[Plutarch]

Beavis's picture

I really like this type of

I really like this type of poem and I think you have a good idea going here, if I understand where you are going. I see it as a conversation, but you need to either expose or refine the emotion a bit more. Definitely on the right track!