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redbrick commented on: there is no lack in you by redbrick 42 weeks 2 days ago
Oh that would be epic, a: Oh that would be epic, a poets' guild of sorts!
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redbrick commented on: + 8TH POEMS: Yet, Realize This Too; Look Unto 1 John 4:18 by S74rw4rd-13d 42 weeks 2 days ago
Most welcome StarwardLed. I: Most welcome StarwardLed. I do believe that stature is a matter of perception and the external and internal views are not always in accord. But you shall always have a sincere response from this pen. 
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S74rw4rd13d commented on: there is no lack in you by redbrick 42 weeks 2 days ago
I wish I had been able to: I wish I had been able to read this poem in the Autumn of 1975, when I had decided (October 13th) to abandon my abortive science fiction attempts and become a poet.  This poem would have made me feel less isolated then.  And that final stanza deserves to be in any textbook on Poetry.  That final stanza is the entire summary of the Poets' duty and privilege.  Having been a Freemason, I could wish there was a similar fraternity for Poets:  and that last stanza would be required memorization for admission.
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S74rw4rd13d commented on: + 8TH POEMS: Yet, Realize This Too; Look Unto 1 John 4:18 by S74rw4rd-13d 42 weeks 2 days ago
Thank you, Sir.  A comment: Thank you, Sir.  A comment from you, who are a Poet of the highest stature, is very important to me, and I really appreciate your interpretation of the poem.
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redbrick commented on: + 8TH POEMS: Yet, Realize This Too; Look Unto 1 John 4:18 by S74rw4rd-13d 42 weeks 3 days ago
As flawed as we humans can: As flawed as we humans can be, to find that compassionate grace and actually have faith in its Giver all worldly obstacles fade in the Presence. A true encouragement to all have fallen short of glory.
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J-C4113d commented on: Third Rock of the APES by WILLIAM377KEITH 42 weeks 4 days ago
I certainly agree with your: I certainly agree with your assessment of this writing.
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georgeschaefer commented on: POETRY ABORTED by georgeschaefer 42 weeks 5 days ago
We're all hobos on the track: We're all hobos on the track but it's usually the insiders that interrupt poetry.  thank you for reading and commenting.  
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Pungus commented on: Wizardry by hollow.point 42 weeks 6 days ago
beautiful: beautiful
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georgeschaefer commented on: UNDER SEASHELLS by georgeschaefer 43 weeks 8 hours ago
thank you for reading and: thank you for reading and commenting.  Beach erosion always seems to inspire poetry  
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S74rw4rd157 commented on: O Frenzied Light by redbrick 43 weeks 13 hours ago
The quality of your poetry,: The quality of your poetry, and of its language, precludes any possibility of a curse.  
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redbrick commented on: O Frenzied Light by redbrick 43 weeks 22 hours ago
Thank you kindly. There are: Thank you kindly. There are times though that it could feel almost like a curse. Such use of language. Most gratefully appreciated
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S74rw4rd157 commented on: O Frenzied Light by redbrick 43 weeks 1 day ago
This poem's language is: This poem's language is deployed in such a way as to sound ancient and archaic, instead of contemporary, and that is a real feat of writing right there.  I applaud the way you demonstrate such poetic skill.
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S74rw4rd157 commented on: hymn of the exiles by redbrick 43 weeks 1 day ago
I look forward to that!: I look forward to that!
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redbrick commented on: hymn of the exiles by redbrick 43 weeks 1 day ago
Thanks S74rw4rd157. Will look: Thanks S74rw4rd157. Will look into unveiling the rest should it be there to unveil.
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S74rW0rd123d commented on: hymn of the exiles by redbrick 43 weeks 1 day ago
This all too brief poem: This all too brief poem sounds like a working script for a film that only a director, like Kubrick had been, could adequately handle.
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