There are times when I: There are times when I realise that I am the 'hobo on the tracks' that interrupts Poetry that I am attempting to keep from being from being aborted.
The blowing in/from the sand: The blowing in/from the sand always fascinated me. Sometimes it comes across as raspberry kisses of the seashore. This is a very moving piece.
What struck me most is that: What struck me most is that the infamous rat race has also overtaken the online poetry world. And so we adapt and battle our way through
This one of the TIMELIEST: This one of the TIMELIEST Poems I have ever read here, and it presents a very shrewd and observant view of what I believe s a universal situation. Only a real Poet could have written this; no wannabe could measure up!
Ozymandias is definitely an: Ozymandias is definitely an influence however distant in the past it may be, so even if the reference or allusion though not direct cannot be denied completely. I was experimenting intentionally with the dithyramb which resembles a great part of my early writing voice. So it must be a blend of sorts of 'this and that.' Thanks so much for having picked that out
I am reminded of the scene: I am reminded of the scene from Alien Covenant which used a line from Byron's Ozymandius "Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!" I can't help but wonder whether this allusion was deliberated?
I was inspired by your..: I was inspired by your Author's Note to compose the following:
If you have a friend who doubts
And you want to help him or her out
Make yourself a friend with benefits
They'll get the benefits of the doubt
Hope you are doing well. Post more.
Thank you for filling my day: Thank you for filling my day with incredible encouragement and light. I couldn’t have asked for a more supportive and inspiring comment. Coming from a true cosmic Poet and humanitarian, that means more than words can say.
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