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williamjroneyiii commented on: Sunshine Through My Window by williamjroneyiii 5 years 7 weeks* ago* I can't thank you enough for reading my story!: I was inspried from the song "Sunshine on my shoulders, makes me happy!" As I came through the door to my office, the sunshined through the room and laid on the wall and the room was heated by the warm moring sun! It pleased me to see that you replied, Thank you! [ go to comment ]
word_man commented on: Sky Full of Legends by patriciajj 5 years 7 weeks* ago* you`re welcome: you`re welcome [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: Night Cloud by owlcrkbrg 5 years 7 weeks* ago* What an imagining and: What an imagining and emotional reflection. Very spectacular a write. [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: A journey until forever by breakfall 5 years 7 weeks* ago* This beautiful piece makes me: This beautiful piece makes me think of a lost friend. I hope it will not be for ever, but the sentiments - many a night I have walked and felt the very sense I now get from reading your poem. [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: HAPPY BIRTHDAY AMERICA by joy 5 years 7 weeks* ago* I did not learn these things: I did not learn these things in kindergarten (didn't start going to school until 1st grade), but had already learned these things at home. Kids are better at resolution than adults - at least back in the day. Hard to say now, as children rarely socialize anymore. [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: Film And TV Directors Who Cause Suffering And Glorify Violence by saiom 5 years 7 weeks* ago* What will be done for money,: What will be done for money, and be disguised as art. [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: the kids are funny, honey by rose 5 years 7 weeks* ago* I love this poem. It's: I love this poem. It's beautifully cynical. Actually, it flips cynicism inside out, away from innocence and the simple beauty of living; instead towards where it belongs. An instant favorite of mine upon discovery. Thank you. :) [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: it's time to.... by bolt 5 years 7 weeks* ago* "To everything There is a: "To everything There is a season, And a time to every purpose under heaven" [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: Deep thinking by jordanchambers 5 years 7 weeks* ago* Yes, character is both shaped: Yes, character is both shaped and reflected by priorities. And thus, so are one's surroundings. [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: Slide by borbug 5 years 7 weeks* ago* To a degree, I think this is: To a degree, I think this is possible. Perhaps, generally, it is doable. It's an endearing thought. In some cases, though, I'm not sure seeking happiness actually serves us well. There are moments where we must embrace other emotions, because they too exist to help us. But I do think your poem - and it's imagery around troubles "sliding" away is, often, good advice. There are many things we do dwell too much on that bring us down in a way that doesn't serve us well. [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: Mum not in this life by cloubay 5 years 7 weeks* ago* This is a beautiful poem. The: This is a beautiful poem. The loved shared within is timeless. [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Heron Clan: February 7, 2021 by djtj 5 years 7 weeks* ago* You have an innate ability to: You have an innate ability to zoom in and out of a scene at just the right moments, on just the right details, with ingenious word choices and crackling snippets of inner monologue that places us, powerfully, inside the character's mind and heart. Such a valuable skill that makes the difference between good and memorable, yes, truly remarkable, writing. "She drew a breath And he held it for her. A silver golden thread of Possession Hung between them," Here, I'm roped right into her fantasy with your superior brushstrokes of language. Hell, I've been her. I know her! Gorgeous writing. And this: "He sits and the crystal sweats and She bobs her head and lets out the breath He was holding." The tension swells to a throbbing need, and then: "The threads collapse . . ." and it only gets better from there. I can't say enough good things about your impressive melding of narrative and eloquence. Just amazing. [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Timeless Promises by deepblue 5 years 7 weeks* ago* With clarity, conviction and: With clarity, conviction and a striking metaphor, you demonstrate true empowerment and self-worth by refusing to settle for cheap imitations of love, no matter how cunningly-wrapped they are in "timeless promises". A liberating, wise and inspiring work of art. Love! [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: An Unwanted Man by lyrycsyntyme 5 years 7 weeks* ago* A compelling backstory waits: A compelling backstory waits to unfold. I'm certainly intrigued by the dramatic questions swirling in this skillfully woven scene. Great writing that hooks the reader within seconds. [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Sky Full of Legends by patriciajj 5 years 7 weeks* ago* Always an honor to have you: Always an honor to have you stop by. Thank you kindly for your incredibly encouraging feedback. [ go to comment ]