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Jeiel commented on: One Of Conon's Peers Extends Some Stern, But Well Meant, Criticism by S74rw4rd-13d 5 years 7 weeks ago
I have to admire the: I have to admire the Ptolemaic Dynasty for creating the Library and Museum which were two of the world's wonders.  The concept was laid down by Ptolemy I, who had been Alexander's field commander and was, himself, a published historian.  His son poured a fortune into the Library, and Callimachus and Conon were probably both employed as staff scholars.  The LXX translation of the Hebrew Scriptures, which is used by the Orthodox Church, was translated under the auspices of the Library.  Unfortunately, when Julius Caesar descided he need to rape Alexandria as well as Cleopatra, a burning mast from one of his ships (all of which were under attack) fell into the Library, burned up many precious scrolls, and was allowed to cause enormous damage before anyone bothered to put it out.
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Jeiel commented on: + 2ND POEMS: Homage To "Haiku Herman" [Herman Achille, Count Van Rompuy] by S74rw4rd-13d 5 years 7 weeks ago
Please forgive my failure to: Please forgive my failure to reply to this.  At the time, my email was not bringing notifications to me.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Deadly and Merciful Blue by patriciajj 5 years 7 weeks ago
I do want to add one thing,: I do want to add one thing, it turns out : ) It's simple, but I just wanted to state how much I appreciate, in terms of personal philosophy, the sentiments in "And I won't care if no one remembers..." How much that very sentiment allows you to be set just as free as those crumbs that leave your hand and ignite the mid-air chase among the gulls. :)  
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Deadly and Merciful Blue by patriciajj 5 years 7 weeks ago
I don't know if there is: I don't know if there is anything I can add which others here haven't already said, but I want to - at the very least - give a nod, a second (or third, or fourth) to each notion of praise that has been laid at your feet for this piece. It's remarkable.
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word_man commented on: Deadly and Merciful Blue by patriciajj 5 years 7 weeks ago
we all seem to be joined: we all seem to be joined together and the emotions that we all share puts us all at harmony we share the same pain and joy,will be remembered by some one
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: One Of Conon's Peers Extends Some Stern, But Well Meant, Criticism by S74rw4rd-13d 5 years 7 weeks ago
You're welcome. And I have: You're welcome. And I have the same impression. As I imagine it, the sciences and the arts shared a much smaller (literal) structural space, where these figures often crossed paths and perhaps - sometimes just feet apart - did their work. Their are countless places for intellectuals to spend their time in their relatively closed circles now, but in those days the such available spaces had to be far, far fewer in number.
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Jeiel commented on: One Of Conon's Peers Extends Some Stern, But Well Meant, Criticism by S74rw4rd-13d 5 years 7 weeks ago
Thank you.  Whoever Conon was,: Thank you.  Whoever Conon was, he inspired, or helped to inspire, one of Callimachus' best poems, and was then, a couple of centuries later, mentioned again in Catullus' "Poem 66."  I am not enough of a historian to know for sure, but I have the distinct impression that astromomy and poetry were much more closely allied than they are now.  Thanks again for the comment and the compliment.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: One Of Conon's Peers Extends Some Stern, But Well Meant, Criticism by S74rw4rd-13d 5 years 7 weeks ago
One thing that is always on: One thing that is always on my mind, when I read any piece of literature about thinkers and scientists of pre-industrial times (whether it a poem such as yours, a historical book, etc.), is how much their historical fame has to do with scarcity of education and a much smaller population. Was a guy like Conon, for example, someone who would be just another white coat in a lab in today's world? I can't exactly say why this crosses my mind so often, but it certainly does :) What ever the answer, I enjoyed your write :)
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AquarianMale commented on: Deadly and Merciful Blue by patriciajj 5 years 7 weeks ago
This was stunning and: This was stunning and beautiful. It needs no other accolades to win your approval. It speaks for itself. It is the brilliance of poems like this that make us want to live more. To feel and connect to the vastness without, and the vastness within. I read this several times, took a deep breath, and heard an angelic voice that pointed me in the direction of God. Absolutely an exquisite piece so indicative of how splendid you are as a poet. Thank you for sharing your talents without want, need, or expectation of the praises some poets demand of work that is vastly inferior. My own included. 
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Jeiel commented on: Deadly and Merciful Blue by patriciajj 5 years 7 weeks ago
Every time you post a new: Every time you post a new poem, the posting is an event of great excitement.  This poem is very Stevensian:  the gulls answers to the pigeons that sink "downward to darkness on extended wings" at the end of the great Sunday Morning; the laboring sea answers to the sea in his poems, "Sea Surface Full Of Clouds" and The Idea Of Order At Key West; and your last four lines reminds me so much of his late, and very poignant poem, "The Planet On The Table."  This is not to suggest any kind of slavish copying; rather, it is an artistic resonance in which one great Poet replies, even without intending to, to another great Poet.  That your poetic mind alludes---whether intentionally or not---to Stevens' work just raises my estimation of your greatness to an even higher degree,  And this is how the Western Canon works, according to T. S. Eliot:  your poem fits right in with Stevens' poems (and, I am sure, with other great Poets' poems), and then modifies itself, and the other Poets' poems, into a new combination.  And having mentioned Eliot, I re-read your poem as I was writing this, and I began to notice correspondences to the Four Quartets:  the presence of time, the sea, the birds, the end, the being deconstructed, and the vision of perfection apprehended at the conclusion.  How one Poet can compose an original poem, and answer both Stevens and Eliot, is beyond my knowledge but it is proof, once again, of your greatness and the breadth of your talent.  Your talent is like a high mountain, and your verbal constructions, taien as one whole, is the observatory built upon that mountain, the better to give us a superlative view of the stars.  I applaud your greatness, and I gladly declare here in this comment.  
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owlcrkbrg commented on: The Red Coffee Cup by owlcrkbrg 5 years 7 weeks ago
Yes.: Thanks for reading and asking.
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patriciajj commented on: Sky Full of Legends by patriciajj 5 years 7 weeks ago
I'm overjoyed that you: I'm overjoyed that you stopped by and took the time to read and leave such a beautiful, inspiring comment. Every blessing to you. 
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ugonna commented on: Sky Full of Legends by patriciajj 5 years 7 weeks ago
RE: "Sky Full of Legends" : Exceptional, valuable and thoughtprovoking lines:    "... The owl cries for me, lover of its billowing proverbs and drops of eternity in  the wilderness of deep living, and I'm sure  I heard: Yes, this too is  God calling and loving, Don't you remember?... "    Abiding heavenly abundance to you, Patricia. Shalom. Ugonna: https://postpoems.org/authors/ugonna/portfolio
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Sunshine Through My Window by williamjroneyiii 5 years 7 weeks ago
No problem, at all. A very: No problem, at all. A very 'warm' take that I thoroughly enjoyed : )
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allets commented on: FLASHBACK! by georgeschaefer 5 years 7 weeks ago
I DRFIT: Priceless! Excellent example of drifting. Impishly yours, allets  
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