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deepblue commented on: Timeless Promises by deepblue 5 years 7 weeks ago
You're too kind! Thank you: You're too kind! Thank you :) 
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allets commented on: The Buoy by lyrycsyntyme 5 years 7 weeks ago
Unsatisfied tide: . Agreement - entire tone and scope of a friend gone like a tide that is "returned to where it's been."  A beautiful image merged to the leave-taking. Oneness attained in a finely sculpted emotion. My favorite line too - or did you guess that? Enjoyed this sea chant. ~S~  
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allets commented on: Deadly and Merciful Blue by patriciajj 5 years 7 weeks ago
I Enjoyed Every Line: ...of this hymn-ode-testimonial. A voyage between existence stream-layers. Not quite heavenly, closer to etherial. More than Earthy, more atmospheroid. The reader drifts on a word-adept's anguish and altitudes. "...weeping at my feet." Just as replays should. Bravo and encore! Somebody was in a literary mood. ~S~  
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patriciajj commented on: Alter of Love by AquarianMale 5 years 7 weeks ago
A banquet of sensual imagery: A banquet of sensual imagery that not only lifts the act of love to its rightful place among the sacred, but blesses it with an artistry of language that sizzles and dazzles throughout. Your symbolism is striking and provocative while the movement suggests the pulsing buildup of aching passion that culminates in ecstasy "melting up, down and in-between".    An eruption of beautiful wordplay. 
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patriciajj commented on: The Poetic Peace Pipe by lyrycsyntyme 5 years 7 weeks ago
Metaphorical magic. With: Metaphorical magic. With innovative flights of language and striking wit, you navigate the dark night of despair and guide us to the door of light: the peace that frees us. A skillfully constructed and crucial message. Thought-provoking and illuminating work. 
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patriciajj commented on: Deadly and Merciful Blue by patriciajj 5 years 7 weeks ago
Your insights and analysis: Your insights and analysis are always a gift more valuable than words can express. That I stumbled upon a resonance with those iconic minds is the most unbelievable and fulfilling surprise. Thank you for another deeply moving vote of confidence and more motivation to reach higher, and add my gratitude to the vastness you observe through your far-reaching lens. God bless you! 
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: She by Psysped 5 years 7 weeks ago
Rich in imagery throughout,: Rich in imagery throughout, but an absolutely incredible piece of imagery in the final lines.
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patriciajj commented on: Deadly and Merciful Blue by patriciajj 5 years 7 weeks ago
Your gorgeous comment: Your gorgeous comment inspired and validated my vision more than you could ever know. My humble and deepest gratitude. 
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: An Unwanted Man by lyrycsyntyme 5 years 7 weeks ago
Thank you very much : ) I: Thank you very much : ) I hope to flesh this out into a write that is so worthy.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Increasing Angst by satishverma 5 years 7 weeks ago
Of the pieces that you've: Of the pieces that you've written which I've been lucky enough to read, this is amongst your best. The profound sequence of lines that you close with, I suspect, will prove quite memorable.
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word_man commented on: Deadly and Merciful Blue by patriciajj 5 years 7 weeks ago
you`re welcome pat: you`re welcome pat
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patriciajj commented on: Deadly and Merciful Blue by patriciajj 5 years 7 weeks ago
Thank you dear friend for: Thank you dear friend for those very uplifting words of wisdom. I'm always honored when you stop by. 
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patriciajj commented on: Deadly and Merciful Blue by patriciajj 5 years 7 weeks ago
What brilliant reflections: What brilliant reflections and an eloquent analysis! An insightful and precious gift. I can't thank you enough. 
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allets commented on: HORRIBLE NEWS by georgeschaefer 5 years 7 weeks ago
Wrong Time: Sad. RIP. .
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allets commented on: STAUNCH REFUSAL (unrhymed fiverse) by georgeschaefer 5 years 7 weeks ago
A Manifesto!: . Bravo!    
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