Unsatisfied tide: .
Agreement - entire tone and scope of a friend gone like a tide that is "returned to where it's been." A beautiful image merged to the leave-taking. Oneness attained in a finely sculpted emotion. My favorite line too - or did you guess that? Enjoyed this sea chant. ~S~
I Enjoyed Every Line:
...of this hymn-ode-testimonial. A voyage between existence stream-layers. Not quite heavenly, closer to etherial. More than Earthy, more atmospheroid. The reader drifts on a word-adept's anguish and altitudes. "...weeping at my feet." Just as replays should. Bravo and encore! Somebody was in a literary mood. ~S~
A banquet of sensual imagery: A banquet of sensual imagery that not only lifts the act of love to its rightful place among the sacred, but blesses it with an artistry of language that sizzles and dazzles throughout. Your symbolism is striking and provocative while the movement suggests the pulsing buildup of aching passion that culminates in ecstasy "melting up, down and in-between".
An eruption of beautiful wordplay.
Metaphorical magic. With: Metaphorical magic. With innovative flights of language and striking wit, you navigate the dark night of despair and guide us to the door of light: the peace that frees us. A skillfully constructed and crucial message. Thought-provoking and illuminating work.
Your insights and analysis: Your insights and analysis are always a gift more valuable than words can express. That I stumbled upon a resonance with those iconic minds is the most unbelievable and fulfilling surprise. Thank you for another deeply moving vote of confidence and more motivation to reach higher, and add my gratitude to the vastness you observe through your far-reaching lens. God bless you!
Of the pieces that you've: Of the pieces that you've written which I've been lucky enough to read, this is amongst your best. The profound sequence of lines that you close with, I suspect, will prove quite memorable.