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Pursia commented on: Swamp by Jesster 31 weeks 1 day ago
I believe that is what most: I believe that is what most poets may call an affect of madness
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Jesster commented on: Swamp by Jesster 31 weeks 1 day ago
The cosmic joke: This cosmic joke isn't funny. Yet, it's also, somehow, hilarious.
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Jesster commented on: Gut Punch by Jesster 31 weeks 1 day ago
oh my: I can still feel that gut punch re-reading this piece. It's amazing that even after years of healing those physical sensory memories are still so strong. 
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redbrick commented on: Tears on the Floor by elliot_jordan2003 31 weeks 2 days ago
First up, the title just: First up, the title just sings the song! And it's heart: "love, once thought eternal, has ended, leaving only grief, memories, and scars." It captures the paradox of heartbreak and its desire to move on versus the inability to let go. The repeated refrain of “tears on the floor” embodies a raw, uncontainable sorrow of someone had left behind. Truly moved.
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elliot_jordan2003 commented on: Nowhere fast by clutchforbalance 31 weeks 2 days ago
Thanks for sharing.: I love how you made the visualization seem so real. Nicely done catching the audience and engaging in your writing.
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elliot_jordan2003 commented on: Will I ever find true love by elliot_jordan2003 31 weeks 2 days ago
Wow: Wow thank you so much. Through all the hurt I find inspiration to write.
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redbrick commented on: behind each step by redbrick 31 weeks 2 days ago
Thank you so much.: Thank you so much. JessterStarshine! You are most appreciated 
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redbrick commented on: fixing a few things by Pungus 31 weeks 2 days ago
Ah yes, nothing says fixing a: Ah yes, nothing says fixing a few things like invoking the divine, clanking pans, and a barstool wobble! 
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redbrick commented on: Gut Punch by Jesster 31 weeks 2 days ago
That line about truth living: That line about truth living in behavior really lands hard. I feel the same mix of respect and ache when wisdom comes from someone who also caused harm. it’s indeed a gut punch to carry both at once, almost like swallowing one's own medicine. 
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Pursia commented on: Swamp by Jesster 31 weeks 2 days ago
dude...: dude...
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Teytonon commented on: Swamp by Jesster 31 weeks 2 days ago
Swamp stamp stump Trump : Swamp stamp stump Trump
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Teytonon commented on: Swamp by Jesster 31 weeks 2 days ago
Swamp stamp stump Trump p.: Swa
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Pursia commented on: Swamp by Jesster 31 weeks 2 days ago
Wow, a powerhouse of imagery: Wow, a powerhouse of imagery in four lines and the orange man is a funny enough figure I definitely laughed at the last
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Jesster commented on: behind each step by redbrick 31 weeks 3 days ago
nice: I love how you brought me into this scene. Your writings always draw me in
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Jesster commented on: THE JESTER’S WAGER by Pungus 31 weeks 3 days ago
beautiful: I really enjoyed reading this piece. 
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