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karlmcallister commented on: a doldrum sea by redbrick 21 weeks 4 days ago
Nice!: Something very daoist about this poem. Calm, magisterial, so intimately bound up with the details of life and yet so unmoved by them.   Beautiful snapshots of life!   Peace!
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karlmcallister commented on: Lessons from the Sea by patriciajj 21 weeks 4 days ago
Living seems possible here: Wow! Some stunning imagery and some really unforgettable lines. I sense that there were some difficult times in your life behind such striking imagery.  As this was written 22 years ago, and as you are stull writing vrilliant stuff, I'm glad you chose life!   Interesting pairing of fire and water imagery.   So generous with water So lavish with light.   What can I say.   Peace
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karlmcallister commented on: What Survives by patriciajj 21 weeks 4 days ago
Talk about aging gracefully!: Your world may be shrinking,  But your vision is bursting it's boundaries! Hope to meet you one day in that place you so aptly envision. Peace!
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patriciajj commented on: feedback reverb by redbrick 21 weeks 4 days ago
“a pause leans into: “a pause leans into itself”    I could have stopped right there and felt the full force of your blazing pen.    But the best was yet to come. Like all fine, atmospheric art in any form, just a wisp of detail or an evocative visual surging with memory, so much like “reverb”, so restless in stillness, creates more than a feeling: it conjures an experience.    As always, a stunner. 
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patriciajj commented on: the eclipse by karlmcallister 21 weeks 4 days ago
This has to be one of the: This has to be one of the most ravishingly beautiful love poems I have ever had the privilege to read. This stellar tribute has an ageless, explosive, fanciful feeling worthy of the astronomical metaphors you sculpted into eloquence.    And that’s no small accomplishment.    A heart melting jewel. 
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J-C4113d commented on: feedback reverb by redbrick 21 weeks 5 days ago
This poem presents your usual: This poem presents your usual verbal skill, and the "haunted" sense reminds me of the film, Burnt Offerings, from 1976.
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patriciajj commented on: + 1ST ORTHODOX POEMS: The Divine Liturgy, From September 14th, 2025, The Triumph Of The Cross [Repost] by S74rw4rd-13d 21 weeks 5 days ago
Thank YOU for being a: Thank YOU for being a valuable source of inspiration and support for so many of us. Although it saddens me deeply to learn about your condition, I know that your uncommon strength and unbreakable faith will carry you through any storm. Keep speaking your truth. It's beautiful. 
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Pursia commented on: feedback reverb by redbrick 21 weeks 5 days ago
Love the cute foreboding: Love the cute foreboding elements of horror on that end-line there: a creature, as it were, reluctantly 'trembling in the beams' or so it seems to me, at least
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: What *Really* Motivates The Homophobes by S74rw4rd-13d 21 weeks 5 days ago
Thanks!  The poem was: Thanks!  The poem was inspired by bullying I experienced between 1969 and 1974, and now I think I understand their motives and their real lack of self-confidence that they concealed behind almost constant verbal abuse, punctuated by physical assault from time to time.  The epithet they constructed around me, "Fairy Jerry" had lingering effects that did not stop until dusk on July 10th, 1976, when I was led to my c.b. handle,"Starwatcher."  That, and the distortions of our factory defective c.b., which turned my pipsqueak voice into a heavy baritone, compensated me for the earlier bullying.
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ramonathompsont commented on: What *Really* Motivates The Homophobes by S74rw4rd-13d 21 weeks 5 days ago
Good point you made here.  : Good point you made here.  
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: + 1ST ORTHODOX POEMS: The Divine Liturgy, From September 14th, 2025, The Triumph Of The Cross [Repost] by S74rw4rd-13d 21 weeks 6 days ago
Thank you most sincerely for: Thank you most sincerely for the comment, the visit, and the prayers.  I was hospitalized recently, as my CHF is worsening.  They told me nothing more can be done, so I am back home to await the call home.  Thanks for taking time from your busy day to visit.
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patriciajj commented on: + 1ST ORTHODOX POEMS: The Divine Liturgy, From September 14th, 2025, The Triumph Of The Cross [Repost] by S74rw4rd-13d 21 weeks 6 days ago
To recognize the epicenter of: To recognize the epicenter of creation and meaning in a staggering universe takes higher wisdom and a profound spiritual connection.    This poem is true worship.    Sorry I’ve been a stranger these past months. The business of living keeps me distracted in best way, but I still keep you in my prayers. Every blessing to you. 
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: 17-words by redbrick 21 weeks 6 days ago
Excellent in both versions.: Excellent in both versions.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: even the sparks are gone by redbrick 21 weeks 6 days ago
Wow, all that verbal power in: Wow, all that verbal power in a few lines.  You show everyone who reads your poetry exactly how it is done!
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ramonathompsont commented on: GREATEST ACHIEVEMENT by joy 22 weeks 15 hours ago
love this!: love this!
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